Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
We human beings are the most smart creature of the nature; nature was not partial while creating us, though, some different are evident which are again the life continuing process of the nature.Though women were lagged behind before - that too was because of the restriction imposed on them - but today women are aheading making an equal step with the men. Men and women, no doubt, can equally contribute to the society and the mankind performing no task lesser than another.
Pasang lamu sherpa was the first women of Nepal who climbed the Mt Everest, the highest peak of the world; making the world know that we women are no lesser than other, if endowed with the oppurtunity. Anuradha koirala, CNN hero-2016, an intrepid figher of women and child rights fought against women and child trafficing, took many different to save the mankinds and humanity; implying the world, we women can also fight for the welfare of the nation. Bidhya devi bhandari, the first women president of Nepal have said we womens are no lesser than anyone, we just need the wings to fly which this male dominated societies ineffate them in their nascent stage.
Today, we cannot see any field, any position where women have not reached. Men and women are different physically but that difference does not form the barrier in any way - the only barrier being our thought. Women are doctors, pilots, army, social workers, politicians, teachers; ther can and are contributing as men in different sectors as men proving the world that their i herent physical difference with men just impede the thought not the ability, not the power they have.
To sum up, we human - men and women - are the impartial creature of the nature; noone being the lesser than the other. Women have the equal capacity and power to walk hand on hand with men; the unseen power yet is the result of though and barrier that the society impose on them on account of being their women.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
...e life continuing process of the nature.Though women were lagged behind before - that ...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...gainst women and child trafficing, took many different to save the mankinds and humanity; impl...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: FIRST_WOMAN_NOUN[1]
Message: We wouldn't say "first man president". Use 'female'.
Suggestion: female
...nation. Bidhya devi bhandari, the first women president of Nepal have said we womens ...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e does not form the barrier in any way - the only barrier being our thought. Wome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83783783784 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.306675546 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4580014666 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.1 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250269437998 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10688739752 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393971607448 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158670394751 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136378529585 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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