Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

Essay topics:

Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

men and women are the two pillars of society. there are so many differences in the physical body structure which create difficulty in performing the various task with equal ease by both and woman. In some areas of the field, they can perform with equally efficient, however, there are many areas where the performance of man and woman are markedly different. I fully agree with the given statement.

Firstly, a woman can perform can care for their children more effectively than the man because nature has provided the woman with breasts so that women can nourish their children when their children are crying. On the other hand, it is very difficult for the man to handle their children when they are crying. women can further take care of their children from the very beginning step to their childhood so that there will be more intimacy between children and their mothers. in my childhood, when I was crying, my father quickly calls my mother for caring for me. when my mother came then I easily stop crying.

Secondly, woman can make better food items than the male because they are more habituated in cooking than male. In my house, my mother cooked more delicious items than my father because the father had never been involved in cooking since his childhood. Likewise, my sister cook very tasty than me as I never engaged in cooking. so due to their involvement in their childhood, they are more perfect in cooking than males. however, some people argue that men can perform or make better food than females but in general women are more trained to cook food from an early age. there may be some exceptions in every part but the woman is more efficient in cooking than male, its reality.

Last but not least, due to the marked difference in physical differences man is more suitable to carry out heavy work than female. In my house, most of the more energy-demanding tasks are always performed by my father and when there is a need of high energy demanding task such as pulling heavy load, my mother always call to my father.

In conclusion, Though most of the tasks can be performed by both men and women in an equally efficient way, however in certain task woman can perform better than men and in some task, men can perform better than females. so I am in accordance with the statement given in the questions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in general, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70731707317 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37333992829 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453658536585 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6393869281 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.578947368 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168123796363 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587173748344 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518778947178 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968465747653 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524211278775 0.0667264976115 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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