Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks

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Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks

Male and female equality has been debated upon for years. Although female inequality is a discussion for different day, I disagree that they are not equally suited for many tasks because of their inherent physical differences. Who believed that a women could earn gold medal in boxing in olympics? Or that men would lead the modelling business. Both genders have prospered in a efficient manner in all tasks.

Traditionally, there has been fights regarding female inequality and debate has been going on from years, because men considered themselves superior to woman for doing many tasks. Many felt like both men and women are more suited to do some particular kind of tasks. But, such thinking has long been eradicated due to both genders being equally suited to any particular task. Any person whether he is a man or a woman can do any particular task if he has the will power to do it. Things which women do can be done by men also in a similar manner. There are not many tasks which only one gender can do any the other can't in the same manner. There are inherent physical differences, between men and women, but, that does not comes into picture while performing day-to day tasks. It was believed that preparing food was well suited for women only, but nowadays we are observing a lot of men getting well suited on making food. On the contrary, most chef shows has a male chef.

Furthermore, both men and women can do any particular task in a same manner, both are equally suited, it depends on the individual. Often, some things are felt as less suited to a particular gender based on preconcieved opinions which are not facts. Take for instance, it was believed earlier, that men are more suited to play cricket and women can't even put a step on the cricket field. But, from past 12-14 years women's cricket has flourished and the following for women's cricket has been increasing day-by -day. Now, a young girl growing up can say see want to be a cricketer which was not possible earlier. In the same way, boxing a game dominated by men, over the years, has been recently taken over by women in many countries.

Finally, there might be some tasks which are more suited to particular gender but, such tasks are scanty. On the contrary, such tasks can also be perfomed by the other gender but, with little extra efforts.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... physical differences. Who believed that a women could earn gold medal in boxing ...
^^
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...hysical differences. Who believed that a women could earn gold medal in boxing in olym...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...sical differences. Who believed that a women could earn gold medal in boxing in olym...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g business. Both genders have prospered in a efficient manner in all tasks. Traditionally, there...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...usiness. Both genders have prospered in a efficient manner in all tasks. Tra...
^
Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red in a efficient manner in all tasks. Traditionally, there has been fights reg...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun felt seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much felt', 'a good deal of felt'.
Suggestion: Much felt; A good deal of felt
...superior to woman for doing many tasks. Many felt like both men and women are more suited...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar manner" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... which women do can be done by men also in a similar manner. There are not many tasks which only on...
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Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ch only one gender can do any the other cant in the same manner. There are inherent ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 724, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: come
...tween men and women, but, that does not comes into picture while performing day-to da...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 60, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a same manner" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...en and women can do any particular task in a same manner, both are equally suited, it depends on...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 346, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e more suited to play cricket and women cant even put a step on the cricket field. B...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, on the contrary, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67718446602 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40807403891 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485436893204 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0902221139 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5909090909 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410829893442 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114553120917 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11019709336 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268041291113 0.150359130593 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126480741598 0.0667264976115 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... physical differences. Who believed that a women could earn gold medal in boxing ...
^^
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...hysical differences. Who believed that a women could earn gold medal in boxing in olym...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...sical differences. Who believed that a women could earn gold medal in boxing in olym...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g business. Both genders have prospered in a efficient manner in all tasks. Traditionally, there...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...usiness. Both genders have prospered in a efficient manner in all tasks. Tra...
^
Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red in a efficient manner in all tasks. Traditionally, there has been fights reg...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun felt seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much felt', 'a good deal of felt'.
Suggestion: Much felt; A good deal of felt
...superior to woman for doing many tasks. Many felt like both men and women are more suited...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar manner" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... which women do can be done by men also in a similar manner. There are not many tasks which only on...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ch only one gender can do any the other cant in the same manner. There are inherent ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 724, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: come
...tween men and women, but, that does not comes into picture while performing day-to da...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 60, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a same manner" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...en and women can do any particular task in a same manner, both are equally suited, it depends on...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 346, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e more suited to play cricket and women cant even put a step on the cricket field. B...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, on the contrary, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67718446602 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40807403891 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485436893204 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0902221139 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5909090909 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410829893442 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114553120917 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11019709336 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268041291113 0.150359130593 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126480741598 0.0667264976115 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.