Men and women are commensurable. Irrespective of gender, both men and women can accomplish many tasks, but, may not a few tasks. I do not bolster the statement that inherent physical differences may not be equally suitable in handling different tasks between the two genders. Nevertheless, we can accept the statement that physical differences create certain differences in the ease with which the work can be carried on.
Firstly, certain onerous tasks like lifting hefty weights, carrying luggage, climbing large mountains so on, can be done by men with less effort. The sensitivity of female body may not at times tolerate such huge pressures. This need not mean that women can not do these tasks, but it requires them more effort and practice. Many women like Mary Com, are now participating in various boxing, weight lifting challenges and winning, this evidence is quite enough to prove the above statement.
Secondly, tasks involving high pressures, tension and mental strain are better handles by women. A research has proved, increased heart attack rate in men than in women because of the inability in handling mental stress. But, there are also examples of many successful business men who could handle critical economical recessions, stress associated with it yet to win the situation.
Thirdly, today's corporate world is not just consisted of men or women but both of them. It resembles like both have become the two sides of the same coin. Where both of them handle all kind of tasks. They specify no separate task between men and women. The world has changed a lot from the past, there seems no hindrance for the equal growth of men and women. They can make any impossible to possible and can also do any job irrespective of any differences.
Collecting all the pieces together, we can conclude that their may be physical differences but this cannot stop them from doing a work. The speed and ease with which the work is been done may differ between the two, but the work can be done. As said where there is a will there is a way and when the willpower of the people to do a work in the peak nothing can stop them to do a task, not even their physical differences.
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- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to add 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... huge pressures. This need not mean that women can not do these tasks, but it req...
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...tal strain are better handles by women. A research has proved, increased heart attack rate...
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... become the two sides of the same coin. Where both of them handle all kind of tasks. ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81962864721 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58252747853 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535809018568 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5614040684 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.85 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186205062613 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619958038315 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356112661361 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107330379103 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038196616235 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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