Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Every human being is unique in his/her own way.When it comes to excelling in many fields which were dominated by men women have clearly shown that they are lesser when it comes to physicality or mentality.Therefore,Women are equally capable of doing many tasks which are performed by men.
This 21st century exposes us to a different level of thinking. Gone are the days in which women are confined to kitchen and were not allowed to go outside. Infact many countries had denied women from voting. Women are excelling at every field which were dominated by men.From the time where women were not allowed to participate in the elections to the time where we have a woman guiding an entire country, we have come a long way with respect to overcoming these indifferences.Kalpana Chawla - a woman who flew into the space, has been successful in making a point which counters the given statement.
Furthermore, women are involved in various kinds of sporting events which were dominated by men back in the years.
PV sindhu who won bronze medal for her country in Badminton clearly shows that women are no way lesser than men in terms of physicality.Even wrestling which requires good amount of physical activity has clearly failed to preclude women from excelling.Rounda Rousey, former UFC champion used to practice with men to build her techniques.When we see women in the fields like Army, Navi, Air Force which clearly suggests that women are clearly not lagging behind men.
Although women are equally capable of doing many tasks, there are tasks which require heavy physical activity.Some of the jobs which involves heavy lifting in construction sites we don't usually see women performing those kind of tasks.This clearly doesn't suggest that women are not capable of doing.
Nevertheless, women are capable of doing many tasks that are performed by men. Be it a task that requires physical activity or a mental activity, women have shown that they can excel anywhere.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, kind of, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05810397554 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94768988689 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535168195719 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.074459916 60.3974514979 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.4 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232437628174 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103157080621 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519870312424 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139954438229 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315422577598 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.