The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News:
"The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg. Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions. Since they were declared a wildlife sanctuary in 2004, development along the coastal wetlands has been prohibited. Now local development interests are lobbying for the West Lansburg council to allow an access road to be built along the edge of wetlands. Neighboring Eastern Carpenteria, which had a similar sanctuary, has seen its sea otter population decline since the repeal of its sanctuary status in 1978. In order to preserve the region's biodiversity and ensure a healthy environment, the West Lansburg council should not allow the road to be built."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
While it may be true that building roads at the edge of wetlands would harm the biodiversity of the region, the argument doesn't give the sufficient reasons for the West Lansburg council to not pass the bill for building the roads along the edges of Wetlans of West Lansburg.Hence, rendering the stated conclusion invalid.
Not to neglect the fact that argument begins it's premise giving a reference to ancient records. The ancient records recording the tufted groundhog's population in millions doesn't provide any indication that other species of that region existed in millions.Moreover, things change as time passes.For example,hypothetically, exitinction of Dinosors can't be attributed to the fact to the pollution caused during that time by any means.Had the argument suggested that some of the animals sustained all the natuaral calamities, even then the argument fails to provide a valid reason for the disturbance of bio diversity is because of human invlolvement of building structures alongside of the coast.
Additionally, the argument exposes futher flaw by comparing the West Lansburg to Eastern Carpenteria. There may be numerous reasons for decline of sea otter population in Eastern Carpenteria. The argument further states that the decline of sea ottrer population is becasue of repeal of santuary status. This by itself poses the threat of assuming too many things without any proof.Futhermore, the argument doesn't provide any hint whether the bio diversity in West Lansburg and Eastern Carpenteria are similar.
Besides, the argument falis to provide any proof why the biodiversity of the West Lansburg is disturbed. We don't know whether building roads along side the Wetland coast would disturb the bio diversity of that region.Even though
the argument mentions the prohibition of development along the coast of wetlands, it fails to provide any exception cases, if there were any.This allows the question of why would local
Because of all these numerous flaws the argument poses, it fails to persuade the West Lansburg council to not pass the bill for building roads along the edges of West Lansburg coast.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The ancient records recording the tufted groundhog's population in millions doesn't provide any indication that other species of that region existed in millions.Moreover, things change as time passes.For example,hypothetically, exitinction of Dinosors can't be attributed to the fact to the pollution caused during that time by any means.Had the argument suggested that some of the animals sustained all the natuaral calamities, even then the argument fails to provide a valid reason for the
Error: natuaral Suggestion: natural
Error: exitinction Suggestion: extinction
Sentence: disturbance of bio diversity is because of human invlolvement of building structures alongside of the coast.
Error: invlolvement Suggestion: involvement
Sentence: Additionally, the argument exposes futher flaw by comparing the West Lansburg to Eastern Carpenteria.
Error: futher Suggestion: father
Sentence: The argument further states that the decline of sea ottrer population is becasue of repeal of santuary status.
Error: ottrer Suggestion: otter
Error: santuary Suggestion: sanctuary
Error: becasue Suggestion: because
Sentence: Besides, the argument falis to provide any proof why the biodiversity of the West Lansburg is disturbed.
Error: falis Suggestion: falls
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 348 350
No. of Characters: 1763 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.319 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.066 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.645 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.864 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.408 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.703 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The ancient records recording the tufted groundhog's population in millions doesn't provide any indication that other species of that region existed in millions.Moreover, things change as time passes.For example,hypothetically, exitinction of Dinosors can't be attributed to the fact to the pollution caused during that time by any means.Had the argument suggested that some of the animals sustained all the natuaral calamities, even then the argument fails to provide a valid reason for the
Error: natuaral Suggestion: natural
Error: exitinction Suggestion: extinction
Sentence: disturbance of bio diversity is because of human invlolvement of building structures alongside of the coast.
Error: invlolvement Suggestion: involvement
Sentence: Additionally, the argument exposes futher flaw by comparing the West Lansburg to Eastern Carpenteria.
Error: futher Suggestion: father
Sentence: The argument further states that the decline of sea ottrer population is becasue of repeal of santuary status.
Error: ottrer Suggestion: otter
Error: santuary Suggestion: sanctuary
Error: becasue Suggestion: because
Sentence: Besides, the argument falis to provide any proof why the biodiversity of the West Lansburg is disturbed.
Error: falis Suggestion: falls
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 348 350
No. of Characters: 1763 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.319 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.066 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.645 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.864 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.408 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.703 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...iodiversity of the region, the argument doesnt give the sufficient reasons for the Wes...
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Suggestion: Hence
...g the edges of Wetlans of West Lansburg.Hence, rendering the stated conclusion invali...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groundhogs'' or 'groundhog's'?
Suggestion: groundhogs'; groundhog's
...he ancient records recording the tufted groundhogs population in millions doesnt provide a...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ufted groundhogs population in millions doesnt provide any indication that other speci...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Moreover
...cies of that region existed in millions.Moreover, things change as time passes.For examp...
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Suggestion: For
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hypothetically
...things change as time passes.For example,hypothetically, exitinction of Dinosors cant be attrib...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hypothetically, exitinction of Dinosors cant be attributed to the fact to the pollut...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Had
...on caused during that time by any means.Had the argument suggested that some of the...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y means.Had the argument suggested that some of the animals sustained all the natuaral cala...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Futhermore
...uming too many things without any proof.Futhermore, the argument doesnt provide any hint w...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hout any proof.Futhermore, the argument doesnt provide any hint whether the bio divers...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y of the West Lansburg is disturbed. We dont know whether building roads along side ...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
...ed. We dont know whether building roads along side the Wetland coast would disturb the bio...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Even
...isturb the bio diversity of that region.Even though the argument mentions the proh...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... any exception cases, if there were any.This allows the question of why would local ...
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Line 8, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s allows the question of why would local Because of all these numerous flaws the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 336.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37202380952 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03693807032 2.78398813304 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488095238095 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.8473053892 162% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.44640681 57.8364921388 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.555555556 119.503703932 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.3333333333 23.324526521 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.70786347227 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189381673172 0.218282227539 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803423999768 0.0743258471296 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489959412825 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104189578428 0.128457276422 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489355140505 0.0628817314937 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 14.3799401198 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.3550499002 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.197005988 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.5979740519 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32208582834 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 98.500998004 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.1389221557 151% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.9071856287 193% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.