“Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.”
There is no doubt in the fact that men and women have different physical constitution and vary diversely in their abilities. This truth can even be generalized to wider classification of animal species as male and female bodies have evolved to best adapt to their living conditions and the role their sex played in the society. But this distinction is getting increasingly blurred as time has progressed. Now it is not impossible to find men and women taking up tasks in almost all spheres of life. To an extent, the argument that men and women are suited to different tasks owing to their physical differences cannot be applied to present scenario without a proper debate and discussion.
Yes. There is no denial in accepting that certain tasks require specific physical traits that fundamentally differences between men and women. Consider the unorganized labor force in India. Every railway station is dotted with men in red shirts eyeing hopefully towards any approaching passenger, eager to pick his luggage up and carry it over to the other part of the station. These 'coolies' are always men and there is very little share of women working as coolies. This is because although tough and physically strong, body of a woman is not as hardened as that of men to take up long hours of physical activities such as lifting and carrying heavy load. This problem escalates if a woman is in her menstrual periods.
However, we always tend to believe that physical differences in a man and a woman's body makes the latter weaker and incapable of doing arduous and laborious tasks. This is a clear fallacy. Do we acknowledge the fact that a woman's body takes tremendous amount of pain during labor and that the physical demands of childbirth are beyond our imagination ? It is said that one labor for a woman is almost as painful as having about forty bones crushed at the same time. To overcome this pain and still be able to birth a new life requires incredible physical strength. Thus is it logical to believe women simply can't do many tasks that men excel in just because men are stronger ? I would like to disagree.
History has played an important role in people arriving at a conclusion to relate succinct physical differences in the bodies of both the sex to their suitability to perform tasks. Naturally, the social and cultural norms of the olden days restricted the choice of jobs women had. While men took to fields and engaged in more physically demanding jobs, women had to take care of the family within the confines of household and thus over the period of time became less physically able to carry out tasks that men did. This can in fact be true for the reverse as well. Men simply lacked the ability to do household chores as these tasks required them to not just put their brawn to work but also do it in a way that did not strain them quickly.
But the scenario is changing now. We have started to see woman in armies, holding guns and fiercely marching forward in regiments. We have women like Serena Williams, who is physically stronger than many male tennis players. And on the other side, we have men taking up tasks that were considered womanly. Many top chefs in five start restaurants are men. These changing patterns imply that physical differences that exist within our bodies are not the definitive factors to tell what tasks we are most suited to do and what we are incapable of doing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 609, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s is it logical to believe women simply cant do many tasks that men excel in just be...
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Line 7, column 442, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...confines of household and thus over the period of time became less physically able to carry ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, while, in fact, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2824.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 597.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73031825796 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94303383012 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53279690435 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50418760469 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 898.2 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3685760653 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3793103448 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5862068966 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75862068966 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169994814992 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457512186796 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375300380516 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104956997406 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253525886969 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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