Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial
Knowing about the past cannot people in making important decisions today.
write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might bot hold true and explain how these consideration shape your position.
The author intended to neglect any past experience as he/she believes that knowing about the past would not help in making proper important decisions nowadays. this point of view validation could be addressed by investigating set of evidences, whereas it could be portrayed that this statement validation is not logically accepted amoung vast wide range of decision making perspectives.
For instance, the author neglecting as lessons could be learn from the past experience of any action. Perhaps a person is experienced to such cicumstances in the past that would be effectly enhance the decision making strategy adopted under the same circumstance in the near or far future. then, the lesson learned from the past knowing of people could help in enhancement of decision taking especially if it were such important decisions.
Furthermore, the author neglecting any consideration would be indicated based upon the past experience of an individual in making his/her own important decisions. maybe rememdering this person's past decision about some issues bolster his/her decision making strategy. this person could even avoid wrong decisons have been made in the past, by considering these past perspectives in any further future decisions. consequently, the invalidation of this intended statement is endorsed.
For example, if a government has taken a seriously important decision about mitigation of an economic problem, this government should learn from the previously experienced strategies adopted to solve such sensitive problems. whereas, as further complications would lead to economical disaster and adulterate the economic situation of this nation. consequently, this government should study both the recent and past experienced available data in order to avoid or even assuage all of the risk perspective and ensure a proper solution to such sensitive problem. then, the issue at least could be solved avoiding wrong past decisions by reducing the probability of wrong decisions by eliminating the wrong past decisions and involving the past efficient decisions or innovating new efficient decisions.
Conversely, the recent nowadays raised issues, which were not existing in the past, maybe do not have any past expereinced data base in older to enhance any decision making process regarding these issues, so knowing past will not be effective to ensure a proper important decision. However, this recent nowadays issues conform the statement validation, this validation can not be persuasive for a wide vast issues that have a past experience and previously studied data base that could engender proper decision making process especially for the important ones.
these previously illustrated evidences are a sample of a set of evidences that bolster the statement invalidation as the past experience about a certain issue would definitly guarantee a more convential proper decisions especially if this decisions are such important ones, which might casue disasters if wrong decision have been taken.
- The following appeared in a memo from the director of a large group of hospitals. "In a laboratory study of liquid antibacterial hand soaps, a concentrated solution of UltraClean produced a 40 percent greater reduction in the bacteria population than did 59
- “Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security.”Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider w 58
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the super screen movie production company.“According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended SuperzScreen-produced movies than in a 26
- Humans arrived in the Kaliko Islands about 7,000 years ago, and within 3,000 years mostof the large mammal species that had lived in the forests of the Kaliko Islands had becomeextinct. Yet humans cannot have been a factor in the species' extinctions, bec 50
- Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation andexplain your reasoning for the position you take. In devel 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, whereas, at least, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2560.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58951965066 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95246242677 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436681222707 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9543855074 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156434954609 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656034004093 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405821481907 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102463935235 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106159667679 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.