Humans arrived in the Kaliko Islands about 7,000 years ago, and within 3,000 years most
of the large mammal species that had lived in the forests of the Kaliko Islands had become
extinct. Yet humans cannot have been a factor in the species' extinctions, because there is
no evidence that the humans had any significant contact with the mammals. Further,
archaeologists have discovered numerous sites where the bones of fish had been
discarded, but they found no such areas containing the bones of large mammals, so the
humans cannot have hunted the mammals. Therefore, some climate change or other
environmental factor must have caused the species' extinctions.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument.
Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications
are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument addressed that the reasons of large mammals extinct is environmental factors such as climate changes, and that human existance has no role in these mammals extinction. This interpretation is based on a set of assumptions.
For instance, the author assumed that humans on Kaliko island could only influence big mammals existance by hunting these big animals. Perhaps the humans did not hunt these mammals but could have been a serious competitor to these mammals on the same feeding sources that lead to mammals extinct due to lack of feeding source for example.
Furthermore, the author interprested that the up to date undiscovered bones of these big mammls on the island is a strong evidence that humans did not hunt these mammls. Maybe these mammals were not hunting by humans but died as a result of there own fights or as a result of any environmental conditions, which by the end of the day would lead to these mammals bones existance is logically expected on Kaliko island.
In addition to the author did not extrapolated from the absence of any bones of these big mammls on the Kaliko island is an evidence that the mammals were not extincted but migrated to another piece of land where a more sutiable living condition for them is experienced. Perhaps these mammals were migrating back and forth through a certain of living circulation.
Moreover, the author assumed that the environmental factors changes is the main reason that reveal the exticnt of these large mammals on Kaliko island after the humans existing on this island by 3000 year. Thus, bones of these mammals are not existing on the island.
Consequently, the author assumped that the humans existing is not a main reason of these large mammals extinctance. Whereas, the climate conditions lead to some mammals migration and leaving the island searching for a suitable climate conditions for there living.
On the other hand, the author assumed that the up to date undiscovery of these mammals bones indicates that these mammals bones would not be discovered on Kaliko island either in ear nor far future.
These previously illustrated stated and unstated assumptions are the assumption that drived the author’s recommendation about the main reasons of large mammals extinction on Kaliko island after 3000 year of humans extistance on this island’s land.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The argument addressed that the reasons of large mammals extinct is environmental factors such as climate changes, and that human existance has no role in these mammals extinction.
Error: existance Suggestion: existence
Sentence: For instance, the author assumed that humans on Kaliko island could only influence big mammals existance by hunting these big animals.
Error: existance Suggestion: existence
Sentence: Furthermore, the author interprested that the up to date undiscovered bones of these big mammls on the island is a strong evidence that humans did not hunt these mammls.
Error: mammls Suggestion: mammas
Error: interprested Suggestion: interpreted
Sentence: Maybe these mammals were not hunting by humans but died as a result of there own fights or as a result of any environmental conditions, which by the end of the day would lead to these mammals bones existance is logically expected on Kaliko island.
Error: existance Suggestion: existence
Sentence: In addition to the author did not extrapolated from the absence of any bones of these big mammls on the Kaliko island is an evidence that the mammals were not extincted but migrated to another piece of land where a more sutiable living condition for them is experienced.
Error: mammls Suggestion: mammas
Error: extincted Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: sutiable Suggestion: suitable
Sentence: Perhaps these mammals were migrating back and forth through a certain of living circulation.
Error: forth Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, the author assumed that the environmental factors changes is the main reason that reveal the exticnt of these large mammals on Kaliko island after the humans existing on this island by 3000 year.
Error: exticnt Suggestion: extinct
Sentence: Consequently, the author assumped that the humans existing is not a main reason of these large mammals extinctance.
Error: assumped Suggestion: assumed
Error: extinctance Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: On the other hand, the author assumed that the up to date undiscovery of these mammals bones indicates that these mammals bones would not be discovered on Kaliko island either in ear nor far future.
Error: undiscovery Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: These previously illustrated stated and unstated assumptions are the assumption that drived the author's recommendation about the main reasons of large mammals extinction on Kaliko island after 3000 year of humans extistance on this island's land.
Error: extistance Suggestion: existence
Error: drived Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: unstated Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 386 350
No. of Characters: 1925 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.432 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.987 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.651 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 151 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.746 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.434 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.762 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The argument addressed that the reasons ...
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Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mammals'' or 'mammal's'?
Suggestion: mammals'; mammal's
...at human existance has no role in these mammals extinction. This interpretation is base...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion is based on a set of assumptions. For instance, the author assumed that hu...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to lack of feeding source for example. Furthermore, the author interprested tha...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...nting by humans but died as a result of there own fights or as a result of any environmen...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s logically expected on Kaliko island. In addition to the author did not extrap...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'extrapolate'
Suggestion: extrapolate
.... In addition to the author did not extrapolated from the absence of any bones of these ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rough a certain of living circulation. Moreover, the author assumed that the en...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ammals are not existing on the island. Consequently, the author assumped that t...
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Line 6, column 164, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mammals'' or 'mammal's'?
Suggestion: mammals'; mammal's
...as, the climate conditions lead to some mammals migration and leaving the island search...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e climate conditions for there living. On the other hand, the author assumed th...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o island either in ear nor far future. These previously illustrated stated and ...
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Line 8, column 161, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mammals'' or 'mammal's'?
Suggestion: mammals'; mammal's
...ndation about the main reasons of large mammals extinction on Kaliko island after 3000 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 386.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11398963731 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77291158025 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422279792746 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2104522969 57.8364921388 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 119.503703932 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 5.70786347227 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242668175825 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11162526631 0.0743258471296 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633633260544 0.0701772020484 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14609039463 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054098268943 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.3799401198 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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