Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold
information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you
should address both of the views presented
The statement engenders two disparate views about political leaders behavior. These two view could be briefed as, political leaders are allowed to withhold some information from public whenever the leaders think it is somehow better to be hide than announced to publics. On ther other hand, the point of view which bolster the need of public to be informed by any available data without any limitations. Whereas, it has been proved along the ages that a clear leadership of any obscure information, is a better compatable society that is developed continously than the societies where polical leaders have abilities to decide whether to inform public with politcal or economical details for example or not. This interpretation could be validated through a set of evidences investigation.
For instance, it is so much conditioned and unrestrained behavior of political leaders who decide what is the information that is announced to public. To demonstrate, a certain political leader could see a certain economical subject is a top secret issue that should not be announced to the public in order to for example untarifying the simple public of no much knowledge. On the other hand another leader could think that public awarness of the same economical situation is a must to be announced to order to increase the public awarness and for example lead to an easier way of solving the problems of this sitation. Thus, leaders themsleves would be not sure what is best to do wether withold or announce the situations, which lead to internal political discrepancies in a society. Consequently, it is resulting an unstable uncompatble society.
Furthermore, conditioned withhold information maybe used in a wicked way in order to support any of leaders’ personal profits.
Conversely, some political issues should not be announced to not inform any polical opponenets with a precise piece of data. For example, information about arms or political situation about an international issue that could lead the opponents to use such information encounter this society. However, this previously intended perspective is true, it can not be generalized upon all distinct fileds. Perhabs, this perpectiove to withhold information is the right thing to do about arm’s issues but it is also not right approach while dealing with economical information and other situation that need clarity and detailed announceing to allow society’s awarness of their country situations. Therefore, the statements that bolster always unconditioned public awarness is a must is the generic true statement.
These prviously, illustrated evidences are a sample of set of evidences that endorse the importance of the public awarness of their societies’ political trends of the vast range of the political fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...ers two disparate views about political leaders behavior. These two view could be brief...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ough a set of evidences investigation. For instance, it is so much conditioned ...
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...xample untarifying the simple public of no much knowledge. On the other hand anoth...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... think that public awarness of the same economical situation is a must to be announced to ...
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Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...s of the same economical situation is a must to be announced to order to increase the p...
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Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
...tion is a must to be announced to order to increase the public awarness and for example lea...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lting an unstable uncompatble society. Furthermore, conditioned withhold inform...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wicked way" with adverb for "wicked"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...itioned withhold information maybe used in a wicked way in order to support any of leaders&apos...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any of leaders' personal profits. Conversely, some political issues should...
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Line 4, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thhold information is the right thing to do about arm's issues but it is als...
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Line 4, column 733, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'bolster'.
Suggestion: always bolster
...uations. Therefore, the statements that bolster always unconditioned public awarness is a must...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a must is the generic true statement. These prviously, illustrated evidences a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39726027397 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11301348932 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486301369863 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5847548162 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.058823529 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 5.21951772744 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221423908495 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800437684522 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533816585582 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119639764866 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757273511755 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.