Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author extrapolated from the global warming trend nowadays that the main reason of the decrease of Arctic deer population is that deers are unable to follow their old-aged migration patternc through Arctic island. This extrapolation should be investigated through logic true evidence in order to be validated.
For instance, the author need to show clear definite evidance that the global warming causes a significant loss of the ice area connecting between the island to the nearest land. Perhaps the global warming only effects a local areas of that ice or even is not effecting that part of the iced area. Thus, the author should provide clear evidence to bolster the extrapolation validation.
Moreover, the author need to provide more evidence regarding the deers’ food avalaiblity. Maybe the deers could be adopted on any other profuse kind of plant or herbs growing on the land. Thus, the deer would not have to migrate to the island to find a suitable food. To demonstrate, deers as many of the other animals could be adopted on the surrounding enviroinement. As the deer have survived along the different ages including Earth’s freezing and warming eras among the hundreds of years. Thefore the author ought to clearify a clear definite evidance regarding the deers life and the possible food that could keep these kind of deers surviving amoung the ages.
Furthermore, the author need to show more evidence regarding the different factors leading to decrease of deers’ population. It could be many differet factors more significant for deers’ reproduction process other than food avalability. Maybe there is an increase of wolves population or any other wild animals which lead to deers’ population decrease. For example, the deers’ suffering a new virus or a certain disease which lead to death of a large number of deers’ population.
The author ought to provide those previously mentioned evidence as sample of the evidence would be needed to be investigated in order to clarify and grantee the validation of his/her extrapolation. The author should cover any of the thoughts which might drag into readers mind to warrant the extrapolation validation.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 353 350
No. of Characters: 1782 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.335 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.048 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.677 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.765 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.567 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.362 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.593 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'area'?
Suggestion: area
...the global warming only effects a local areas of that ice or even is not effecting th...
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Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'deers'' or 'deer's'?
Suggestion: deers'; deer's
...a clear definite evidance regarding the deers life and the possible food that could k...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...e and the possible food that could keep these kind of deers surviving amoung the ages. ...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...different factors leading to decrease of deers' population. It could be many...
^^
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... certain disease which lead to death of a large number of deers' population. The author ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 352.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30397727273 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88412583258 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480113636364 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7967822302 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.823529412 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 23.324526521 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129408391577 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484360176745 0.0743258471296 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516631963612 0.0701772020484 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755437950083 0.128457276422 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468549192564 0.0628817314937 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.3550499002 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.