The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Very often one finds himself or herself lost when it comes to understanding the contemporary culture. In fact, there are several ways to spot the trends and understand clearly the features of this culture. In order to recognize the wide variety of the characteristics of beliefs, values and themes one should analyze the trends of its youth. In my opinion, I partly agree with this suggestion and argue that each age contributes to the contemporary culture by shaping it and spreading it around the world for a few reasons.
To begin with, age is nothing. As we mentioned culture is belief, value and theme . Thus, the young generation can very well reflect and conduct these features, but all generations can do this on their own way. For example, there are many things that the youth gets from older generations and vice versa. Consequently, trends change due to globalization as well. In a family, some people move abroad, some live in the countryside, and some may choose to spend their life in a big city. They are like the puzzle pieces that when put together make the ‘big puzzle’ of culture.
Secondly, even that we assume that the new generation’s trends and nothing else are the contemporary culture indicators one has to analyze many like politics, religion, economy, etc. There is a broad amount of branches to be taken into account. For example X country may have a very good economy but the architecture does not show a great progress. Italy, Rome is the opposite of X because architecture, art, and religion offer a pretty good understanding of culture trends. Analyzing culture is looking through time, because time is what it takes to have a set of features that makes each culture identifiable
Of course, some argue that youth carries on with the culture, but they forget that all generations are part of it and time and globalization are key factors. One cannot ignore these because it is like thinking as culture is a ‘tree’ and considering only the branches, the youth and ignoring the roots and everything else. Contemporary culture shows the present, but is like a flowing river that never ends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in fact, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90055248619 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78812649299 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.969642526 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286395060917 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759830903921 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630707498643 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169998105847 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809609232026 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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