"Most of the people we consider heroic today were, in fact, very ordinary people who
happened to be in the right place at the right time
The predominance of the personality of hero in all tribes and societies during the long period of time is not stealthy for anyone. Among a diversified constellation of perspectives, some may regard that hero is not only the chance of one to be in an accurate position in a precise time. On the other side of the coin, others persevere in unraveling the notion that the hero cannot be attributed to all ordinary ones or some opportunities, and it should be derived from oligarchy status on one society. After weighing these both sides, the former outlook seems more plausible.
Consider the first respect people hold for justifying the statement. To put in more general words, having planned meticulously and anticipated each step in life, the one may have accessed to a pinnacle of accomplishment. To shed more light, becoming hero is cannot be defined as a far-reaching phenomenon just for special persons with exceptional aptitudes and flairs, in contrast, it can be considered as working hard and being goal oriented to make forward in everything even the hero. Simply stated, the combination of both planning scrupulously and taking each step calculated and discreetly can propel one toward the hero as leaving a famous name in history for good.
To further elucidate the attitude of former group, the ability of recognizing and grasping all opportunities and in sundry situations can be scrutinized aptly. Going into the depth, only when one possesses the high competency of looking all chances profoundly and capture the most transient moments of conditions, may be entitled as hero. As a matter of the fact, to be as hero, it is necessary to abandon and sacrifice some palatable aspects of life, as well as, coming to the point that you should embrace some risks and challenges to maintain this title. To recap, here the role of utilizing all moments correctly and reinforcing the skills of converting each obstacles as steps which make them close to triumph.
In approaching the latter angle, what is mentioned above might not be overgeneralized to all contexts, there some ideas that hero can only be accessible through being reputed among the general public. Or, to better delineate this belief, seldom is the one named hero from the ordinary group of the society and only the specific persons such plutocratic individuals in one colony can reach the title of hero. Indeed, based on this thought, hero goes beyond the talents, comprehension, hard working or even seizing the circumstances. Accordingly, hero can be ascribed to the affluent persons holding power and wealth in their hands. Thus, who could deny the importance of being from special class of one community to obtain the name of hero and perpetuate it in history for many years?
Based on a bulk of enumerated reasons, in spite of subsisting some deviation from the general rule about averring the hero by the support of oligarchy, the benefits of observing the hero through the window of working assiduously even from normal class of the society are too enormous to fathom. To recapitulate the reasons, not only will the hero is originated from planning cautiously and capturing all seconds, but also it may be derived from the persons implementing their talents and abilities in right ways in an exact time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ll tribes and societies during the long period of time is not stealthy for anyone. Among a div...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ost transient moments of conditions, may be entitled as hero. As a matter of the ...
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Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maintaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: maintaining
...hould embrace some risks and challenges to maintain this title. To recap, here the role of ...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...essible through being reputed among the general public. Or, to better delineate this belief, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, thus, well, in contrast, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2752.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 549.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01275045537 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84542724668 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 882.9 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2618019384 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.842105263 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8947368421 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104189665793 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343689590176 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342418433235 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618152902272 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103384870613 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.