"A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Developing a standard national curriculum to support all kind of students is difficult. A lot of iterations have to be made and a lot of discussions of what should be included and not. However the impact of this development will reflect to students. In my opinion, i strongly disagree with this recommendation and I'm going to explain why in the following paragraphs.
To start with, having a nation standard curriculum limits a student from every aspect. For example, if a nation decides to not include Advanced Physics a portion of students who liked Physics will lose intrest. Thus, those students need to change direction of what should they study.
In addition, a nation will limit a student to study overseas. Again take the example of Advance Physics. If it's a compalsory for a student to have the knowladge of this cource outside of his nation, it will narrow down all of his chances to study aboard.
Moreover, having a standard curriculum it will lack of student variaty. What I mean by that is that if all students have the same courses without the option to choose will result a generation with equal skills in socity. Without musicians, athlets or actors. As most of these are arts which are not thought in school.
One way to think that one spesific curriculum will work is at the collages of the nation only. They know that the curriculum is that, so they can arrange the entrance to the collage. At the last year of the school, students should thake the same exam and y% of those with high grade can enroll to the collage.
To sum up, because one curriculum cannnot cover all the variates of students, a curricullum can be made with brances. Meaing that if the studend likes art should follow the ar branch, likewise if the student likes history should follow theoritical branch.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...take the example of Advance Physics. If its a compalsory for a student to have the ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... Without musicians, athlets or actors. As most of these are arts which are not th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, for example, i mean, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78274760383 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60575596945 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536741214058 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3033567889 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7894736842 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244973514133 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732752005122 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441000810836 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126617099283 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028374407831 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ons of what should be included and not. However the impact of this development will ref...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y disagree with this recommendation and Im going to explain why in the following p...
^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...take the example of Advance Physics. If its a compalsory for a student to have the ...
^^^
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... Without musicians, athlets or actors. As most of these are arts which are not th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, for example, i mean, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78274760383 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60575596945 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536741214058 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3033567889 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7894736842 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244973514133 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732752005122 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441000810836 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126617099283 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028374407831 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.