Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Before several years ago, there where a plethora of problems that scientists were unable to solve due to technology limitation. Today as the technology saw an exponensial growth many of these problems have been resolved, others are in the proccess and another are not able to be solved yet. In my opinion, as we solve problems more and more questions pop-up as a result to non-ending problems.
We can agree that technology made our life more easier, more comfortable versus a decate ago. This shows how technology impact our life and as science are able to solve problems such as: communication, travel, extchanging goods there should be a demand to expect more. Thus the requirements will increase, and new problems will occure in society due to the variance of the society. For example, in a wealthy city the requirements for a living will be different compare to a less wealthy city.
Moreover, with the help of technology we can cure a lot of health problems that where unable the health doctors to cure as a result a big porportion of people to die or the cure was too expensive. But there are some that we didn't figure out yet like AIDS which is the most "killing" descease.
Now, thinking a society without any problems cannot be fissible as each person is unique and each person has different requirements, different way of thinking, different problems. There is an infinity of problems that the society should cover and we have finate solutions.
To sum up, we canno't say that technology with science didn't solved a mirriat of society's problems but to say that in one day there will be no more problems cannot be consider true because as we solve problems the requirements of a person increase.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...can agree that technology made our life more easier, more comfortable versus a decate ago. ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...here should be a demand to expect more. Thus the requirements will increase, and new...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...o expensive. But there are some that we didnt figure out yet like AIDS which is the m...
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Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...cannot say that technology with science didnt solved a mirriat of societys problems b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85423728814 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82794768968 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51186440678 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2148605373 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22941087883 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827692983769 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544817094858 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130243299766 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613865679571 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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