Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
It's true that many undergraduate students can select a variety of subjects outside their fields. There is an argue where undergraduate students majoring in Business or in Sciences should not be compalsory to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won't benefit future carees. In my opinion, taking courses related to your field is much better.
To start with, a big porportion of undergraduate students make a loan in order to take a degree. Having that in mind, those students do not want to take extra courses, and more important outside in there field of study, as they want to finish as soon as possible to pay their loan. In addition, many undergrads and styding overseas. As a result they spend much more money for rent, food, etc. Thus, having non-related courses will benefit the undergrad for saving money.
Moreover, the structure of Business or Sciences school will be more specific and this will have a result of more advanced cources for the undergrads plus a deeper understanding. This will make the undergrads more competitive, as these two fields of studies are competitive and demanding, for theire future carrer as they will have more experience.
On the other hand, having only course related courses will not make you a well-rounded person. This will result as a minor negative for finding a job in the near future.
To sum up, having course related subjects will benefit the undergraduate student. But if a collage will algamate a good syllabus with humanities and business or Sciences could benefit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...subjects outside their fields. There is an argue where undergraduate students majoring i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 257.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02723735409 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73234326317 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0264064269 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276982825118 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103341814492 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115708124741 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174796215155 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121690191588 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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