A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
A nation's decision always relies based on all the factors taken into consideration. The curriculum they release should be positive and beneficial to almost entire country. The prompt recommends that a nation should make it as mandatory to study the same curriculum until the school level. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion that the education students should be equal due to the following reasons.
To begin, after entering college level ,students split into courses according to their interests. So, they may encounter various people from different institutions. if the syllabus they studied previously would be same, then it is easy not only for the teachers to teach but also for the students to understand easily as everyone is at the same level. For example, if students study different curriculum then, when they enter into college some may not be able to cope up with the courses due to lack of sufficient knowledge and some may already know that and may be not interested to study those courses. In that situation, it results in colleges to start institutions based on their syllabus which is a difficult task.
Further, if the students are at balance level of curriculum, it is easy for teachers in college level to educate them. And even,if the knowledge of students is not sufficient for the college level, then it is tough task for them to enter into college and qualify the courses. this is due to the lack of curriculum under the college level courses.
The same curriculum is fruitful in the other way also. when you are interested to move to another place for college level of study , if the education is same then it will be easy for us to complete our education otherwise leads to lack of knowledge and degrade of scores. For example, if a student's family gets transferred to a new place in same nation , then it will be easy for those students to study in the new place if the curriculum is same in the entire nation.
Ofcourse, some argue that they want their regional knowledge to be known by their students. Apart from regional knowledge, they must be aware of common syllabus which helps them to boostforward in a brilliant way for their higher education. However, if they want regional knowledge they can make them study as optional subjects. There will be bright future for nation's students if their curriculum before entering college is same which results in better study when they enter college level.
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...llabus which helps them to boostforward in a brilliant way for their higher education. However, if...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, apart from, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87799043062 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6062577319 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425837320574 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4211822659 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.315789474 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379577085561 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134360818487 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971439869482 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236962616818 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634259954589 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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