A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Though School’s reputation, the teachers, infrastructure are important, the curriculum offered in schools is of paramount importance and not to be overlooked, it tells what the child will be learning throughout his or her schooling. The prompt suggests that the nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this for two reasons.
To begin, children entering college will have to make one’s way through the entrance test. Having a national curriculum will provide an easier platform for judging kids fairly. Every kid will have the exact probability of getting into universities. For instance, A rich kid who can afford to go to a private school will have access to the same curriculum, that is available to the poor kid. This in fact provides equal opportunities to every category of kids irrespectively. From an exam point of view, since every kid is taught the same syllabus the test is authentic.
Further, this makes it easier for the government to collect data relevant to the education sector and can aid in better research on what can be done in this sector for improvement, allocation of resources etc. The government will be able to better understand the quality of the student from primary schools. This data is very beneficial as education is of the colossus significance in a countries development.
Even though the diversity of the curriculum available for the kids to choose is hampered by the nation. The pros out way the cons and this can act as a medium of regulating the education sector and making sure the standard of education is on par throughout the country.
As education is a basic right and the nation must ensure this basic right is mostly flawless and unvaried.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...on is of the colossus significance in a countries development. Even though the divers...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99667774086 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8649973163 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6133955019 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152151478792 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594136440458 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959542845265 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849195162888 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675732665455 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...on is of the colossus significance in a countries development. Even though the divers...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99667774086 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8649973163 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6133955019 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152151478792 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594136440458 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959542845265 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849195162888 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675732665455 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.