As per the statement given by the eduator, I partially disagree with the idea. As we all know that the shape of the pot is difficult after it is created, In a same way, the idea of one's after sometime it is difficult to recreate. It would be importamnt if the variety of curriculum away from the national curriculum should be taught. Student should focus on their field of interest. It is unnecessary to perform the battery inspection test being a accountant.
It might be late for the child to start for their best course that they are seeking. Nowadays, every schools are offering variety of cources as per students needs and desiree. After the covid outbreak generally all schools are providing online classes. Also, students are earning from internet. Internet has provided wide variety of courses for students. Students can inhance different variety of cources as per their capability and interest.
we can look back to various examples of the great leaders who were influenced to be great from their child age. Every students are different from others thus, it can't be best possible way to teach same curriculum to all students.
India national school curriculum provides the basic knowledge of software programming therefore,16-17 year's kids are developing software in India. These could not have been possible if they were forced to study the curriculum provided by nation of India. Thus, a small motivation should be provided to the students and they can be best in the future.
what if Lionel messi- the greatest player in football history- was told to study the curriculum provided by school and stay away from their field of interest. The history might not be same. Thus, one should enroll in their field of interest from begining of their chapter.
There might be some inportant courses like knowledge in medical first-aid, CPR, and other imergency skills which everyone must learn either from school or college.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a same way" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e pot is difficult after it is created, In a same way, the idea of ones after sometime it is ...
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Line 1, column 447, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rform the battery inspection test being a accountant. It might be late for the ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rces as per students needs and desiree. After the covid outbreak generally all school...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... as per their capability and interest. we can look back to various examples of th...
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...enced to be great from their child age. Every students are different from others thus...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ents are different from others thus, it cant be best possible way to teach same curr...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...ents are different from others thus, it cant be best possible way to teach same curr...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...are different from others thus, it cant be best possible way to teach same curriculum t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...s and they can be best in the future. what if Lionel messi- the greatest player in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st learn either from school or college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01557632399 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58013144053 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523364485981 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8801776026 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207419787288 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662482198577 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615037755894 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105861338425 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071156120489 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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