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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

The nation plays an important role in peoples' lives. One of the ways in which they do is in eductaion, education is the bedrock of an economy, as the future leader of tomorrow is groom via that means. Having a national curriclum that is uniform in all levels of education until college is of paramount importance as it aids uniformity across all states in the nation. The prompt recommends that students should study with similar national curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the suggestion, and argue that there should be uniformity across board in alll levels of education until college for three reasons.

Admittedly, schools at all levels have their own complexities and usually require students to pay school fees dependent on how sophisticated their school system is. For instance, a student in a federal high school paying a fee that is subsidised as against one that went to a private school and requires an exorbitant amount of money to be paid as school fees, this is justfiable enough, that such student should be taught differenly,and most likely taught with a curriculm that differes from that of the former. As such school might most likely want to incorporate the abroad system of teaching and ensure the students obtain the value for their money. Laying emphasis on the 'difference must be felt'.

However, uniformity in curriculum plays a vital role in ensuring everyone is on the same predestal and helps to prevent any form of knowledge gap, as they are being taught using the same curriculum. This helps to ensure before proceeding to tertiary university, everyone has to an extent the same level of knowledge and should be considered as equals in that aspect. As college tends to build from what is being taught in the preceeding levels. For example, if students are taught with different curriculums, fisrt year of college might be difficult to grasp for students that their curriculums did not teach the nitty gritty of certain subjects which should have laid the foundation for them prior to entering college. This example explains the importance of uniformity.

Additionally, similarity in national curriculum ensures unhealthy competition amongst students in the first year. It prevents people from having imposter syndrome or seeing their pair as being superior. It accords that level of assurance to the first year students, as they are assured that they are being taught the same thing and they would be competiting based off on what they know, given the fact that they were taught using the same curriculum.

Of course, people would argue that someof these people paid a lot and should be treated differently with a different curriculum, the above doesn't negelect the fact of the high fees being paid,it just belabours on what is being taught. The way it is being taught can differ but what should remain the same is the curriculum. As similarity prevents any form of unhealthy competition, provides assuarance to first year entry students and erase any form of knowledeg gap.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2546.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03162055336 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66064867718 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47628458498 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7771817437 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338243690513 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10515313455 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106843053358 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189862129893 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104167582616 0.0667264976115 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments