A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

The issue focuses on mandating the same national curriculum across all schools. However, before directly jumping on to this compulsion we need to analyze the pros and cons associated with it. From the perspective of a teaching body, a same national curriculum will not only allow the school to treat all the students as equal but also ensure that each student receives fair and just education. All the students across the nation will have a common platform on the basis of which their grade computation will become easier. No student will receive any special treatment or special form of education and each student will have same base of concepts till the time they reach college.

Having the same curriculum across will surely simplify tasks of teachers and schools but from a student's standpoint, it is surely going to impose a restriction on his/her thinking capability. A diverse curriculum allows students to experience different topics and subjects which enhance their mental capabilities. When the students are exposed to different topics, they are bound to like some topic more than other. This proclivity for a particular topic further leads in developing of interest for the student in that particular field.

At current scenario, majority of the schools follow the pattern of diverse curriculum. As a statement of fact, a diverse curriculum not only focuses an all round mental enrichment of students but also enhances a student physically. The student can experience different sports and find the best suited sport for him/her and continue to grow further in that sport.

However, adhering to diverse syllabus schools should not ignore the fact that there are certain subjects or topics which are essential and need to mandated across all schools. Subjects like Mathematics and Science which are essential in higher studies must be made same across all teaching bodies.

Examining these above mentioned factors, one can truly conclude that a same curriculum does put a restriction on the mental and physical capabilities of a student. According to me, a perfect balance of curriculum will be one which have few mandatory subjects and from the rest lot, student should be given freedom to choose based on his/her interest. This will help the student identify where his true interest lies.

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Average: 8.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...asks of teachers and schools but from a students standpoint, it is surely going to impos...
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Line 17, column 165, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...and physical capabilities of a student. According to me, a perfect balance of curriculum will b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21983914209 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63762283972 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522788203753 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0225735399 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.529411765 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52941176471 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299537835193 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978752366279 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649846436758 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15324709679 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768723013455 0.0667264976115 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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