A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Education is important for all students. I disagree with this prompt recommendation because a nation can't chose same national curriculum for all of students. Students have right to learn different culture. In school, students are trying to learn different subject such as history, economics because it helps a students in his career.
If a nation fixed a same national curriculum for all of its students, it hampers students mentality to cope up with this program. All students does not want to learn same type of program. Also main concern is that how can a nation distinguish which curriculum is best for all of students. What is the basis of this chosen curriculum. How can they sure that this program has been successful.
After chose same curriculum for all of students, it will be difficult to distinguish the talent students from all of students. A talent did not show his potential because of same curriculum. In school, students want to explore different things but because of same curriculum they strict to same project than trying to learn different things. Some minorities have to face cultural problem because of same curriculum. They do not learn their history and culture and it will be difficult to cope up with new type of curriculum.
This is not to say that i think that this statement is the best course of action for all of students.For reducing competitive mind of students, nation is trying to same curriculum for all of students. It will be a boon for students if students does not think compare with other students.
In essence, a nation cannot chose same curriculum for all of students . It does not come out with good way. All students have different potential so they have to chose their way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... prompt recommendation because a nation cant chose same national curriculum for all ...
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Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
... as history, economics because it helps a students in his career. If a nation fixed a...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'do'.
Suggestion: do
...cope up with this program. All students does not want to learn same type of program....
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...not want to learn same type of program. Also main concern is that how can a nation d...
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Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...urriculum. This is not to say that i think that this statement is the best c...
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Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...st course of action for all of students.For reducing competitive mind of students, ...
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Line 17, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hose same curriculum for all of students . It does not come out with good way. All...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 294.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72059188856 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41156462585 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6172815532 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2631578947 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84210526316 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283232033369 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11148760049 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801745055785 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193000685225 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368387625243 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.