A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.
A nation's growth is measured in terms of its diversity in every field, and this will be strongly affected if every student of the country undergoes the same fix national curriculum. One of the most important resources a nation has is its human resource, and education system helps in building workforce which can bolster innovation and growth prospects in every field. This is the main reason why changes in education system are widely debated; a robust and efficient education system helps in securing its future. Using the same national curriculum for all will defy the very meaning of diversity in workforce.
In vast nations, such as India, where constitute of different societies, ethnicity, and language; a common curriculum will be protested by its people. One aspect of education which may be beneficial for one section may not hold true for the other. Societies should be free to propose education based on the relevancy of that section. We are not supposed to produce machines, which performs the same task again and again. Based on the factors which are essential for future growth of the students, curriculum should be proposed.
In the process of having a fix national curriculum, the uniqueness of child will be sacrificed. It is often this uniqueness when worked upon, results in great figures in society. A student, who is going to carry his father’s business of clothes, have no benefit of learning esoteric subjects like calculus or a person, who will end up in software industry, does not benefit from learning history and geography. In proposing a common curriculum, government is not giving enough choices to students to explore. Today's world has interlinked and cross disciplinary courses are making a fortune; students should have freedom to choose between subjects and based on that they will be able to decide their major in college.
However, few basic courses are a must for survival of any student. Basic courses of language, mathematics, and science should always be the core of any curriculum, but societies, schools, or students should be given freedom to choose between those courses which they find useful and worth time-spending for future. Nation should propose basic guidelines, having few compulsory and few optional courses, based on which a curriculum can be made.
Conclusively, it is important that every student should possess the basic knowledge of core subjects, but at the same enough freedom of choices should be presented to the students so that we are not in the process of making machines but experts with unique talents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
A nations growth is measured in terms of its dive...
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244161358811 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.15923566879 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0997876857749 0.0880659088768 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031847133758 0.0497285424764 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0254777070064 0.0444667217837 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11889596603 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0573248407643 0.0406280797675 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74531510755 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0191082802548 0.030933414821 62% => OK
Particles: 0.00212314225053 0.0016655270985 127% => OK
Determiners: 0.0912951167728 0.0997080785238 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0403397027601 0.0249443105267 162% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0233545647558 0.0148568991511 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2583.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 421.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13539192399 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420427553444 0.366273622748 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318289786223 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.230403800475 0.200843997647 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137767220903 0.132149295362 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74531510755 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50593824228 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 56.5580632998 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3888888889 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6728725606 59.4972553346 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 141.124799967 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 55.2178675112 51.4728631049 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.94117647059 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369622205528 0.391690518653 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130093944637 0.123202303941 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0807620410358 0.077325440228 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.563980711891 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156985627038 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145535502971 0.161403998019 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631077930527 0.0892212321368 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273810446409 0.385218514788 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.047161482486 0.0692045440612 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235502287079 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151252652211 0.0653680567796 23% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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