A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is the backbone of a nation. It is one of the basic needs of human beings. A nation can achieve their goals by making their population educated. That is why a good education system is highly required. The main thing is to make a base for the students. What is a best base for the students. Some would say, a nation should only have the curriculum that is same for all until college for students. But Some other would disagree with them. However, for many reasons, a same national curriculum is the best curriculum for students until college.
If a student can get a curriculum that only contains the subjects in which he or she wants to continue in future, has some advantages too. It can save some time for him or her. The student can use that time on other things. It can enhance the extra curriculum activities for the student. Oviously, the less the subjects are, spending money for those courses are also less. It can save a good amount of money for the parents.Moreover, the student can focus on the career from a early age.
On the other hand, same curriculum has lot of advantages. A student can have knowledge about every subject in his school. He can explore many things. It opens the path for students to choose a career from different fields. Exploring various subjects can make a student all rounder. He can have lessons about science, history, geography, social science, sports and so on. It will help him do well in future, in whatever he study.
In a nutshell, it is very important that student should have the same curriculum in school. It will have a good impact on students not only in proffessional life but also in personal life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...o make a base for the students. What is a best base for the students. Some would ...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ts in which he or she wants to continue in future, has some advantages too. It can save s...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... a good amount of money for the parents.Moreover, the student can focus on the career fr...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he student can focus on the career from a early age. On the other hand, same c...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...rts and so on. It will help him do well in future, in whatever he study. In a nutshell...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
Suggestion: studies
...p him do well in future, in whatever he study. In a nutshell, it is very important...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6228956229 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57168534413 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488215488215 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0266490247 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.2083333333 118.986275619 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.375 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.54166666667 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224201490018 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697079317654 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912981234454 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142240870408 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773271783639 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 14.1392134831 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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