a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
This topic raises inflammatory issues whether a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Undoubtedly, all students in school should have a common ground knowledge before entering into college.Notwithstanding, if students follow different curriculum, it will be tedious task for government to control the whole system. So, I agree with the opinion that all students should follow the same national curriculum before the move into college.
First of all, it's important for the students to have some very basic knowledge
before moving into college. If there have different curriculum , it could create knowledge-gap or discriminaiton among the students. For example, if an institute follow a different syllabus for mathematics where have some lack, it will create problems for students of that institution.Moreover , they will be far behind of the students who follows a better syllabus.
Secondly, if there have disparate curriculum this will be hassle for the government to ensure a better education for all. Different institution will create different curriculum, which will be beyond the limit of government to manage properly.
Lastly, if there doesn't have same curriculum, a different exam system should be maintain which will tedious. In adition, selecting better students to admit into college will be another burdain, cause all of them didn't follow the similar curriculum.
In conclusion, although students and institution should have freedom to teach students in their way but it shouldn't be at school level. As long as some measurement are performed or some areas are involved all students should follow the same national curriculum to better future consequences. In fact, in college level they will get chance to choose their desired field of study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51590106007 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09812838784 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508833922261 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.204070595 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399032114894 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174702493989 0.0831039109588 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192123273073 0.0758088955206 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213450508354 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192776010248 0.0667264976115 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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