Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
In few decades before we couldn't just type with a keyboard to write our important documents but now people not only writing just sitting on a computer but also thinking about how they can do it faster! Considering such cases, technology is not making our live complicated , it's just making our live more simple.
For example, we can see the revolution of technology in every aspects of life - communicating with people who are living in thousands mile away , watching satellite televisions just sitting on our bed , giving GRE exam just sitting on a computer etc. These are just few , there have hundreds of example of techologies which just makes our life more smarter than ever before.
Moreover, in these days people can now call a car with just few clicks which we could not imagine in few years back. Uber like company brought such outstanding solution to help people to go in a desired places even without having a private car , this also created a way of income for the driver - what decreases the unemployment rate in a proficient way.
Another example could be point out that , the social media like Facebook creates great social impact in our daily life. People now can communicate with their friends , family , relatives without any hassle; it's not just like past days while people were sent letters via post and wait for months to get deliver them! Everything just happening now in a milliseconds which just saving our valuable times and we can do other things on saving those time.
So, technology has been created to make things more simpler not just to complicate it. If we can properly use those smarter technologies , it will surely bring our live into more amazing in different ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
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Message: Use only 'smarter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smarter
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proficient way" with adverb for "proficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a millisecond' or simply 'milliseconds'?
Suggestion: a millisecond; milliseconds
... them! Everything just happening now in a milliseconds which just saving our valuable times an...
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Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
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... properly use those smarter technologies , it will surely bring our live into more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85223367698 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5141762883 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611683848797 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.649121071 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.888888889 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188534842086 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909766431841 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754972315723 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125971524426 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853881036343 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.