College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
This topic instigates the impugnable issue whether college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. Undoubtedly, students should choose their desired field of interest considering future impacts. In spite of that, students shouldn't rely only the job perspectives of the chosen field of study. So, I disagree with the opinion that students field of study choosing should be solely dependent on the availability of jobs in that field.
First of all, if someone choose a field which now have huge job availability , but what if after few years ? There have no such guarantee there will be adequate job after 5 years. For example, deep learning is now the trending topic to study in the field of computer science, there have huge jobs in the market as well. Considering such criteria, is it reliable that this field will create more jobs after 5 years or 10 years? Revolution of technology happening every now and then, those jobs might be lost in the crowd if something new arrives on the trend.
Moreover , it should be consider that, one field of study can create opportunity in many other fields as well. In instance, if someone study on mathematics he/she can impact in greater areas. Mathematics requires is most of the field of work , if someone can get the proper skill he would be fit anywhere.
Additionally, college students shouldn't choose field of study where they have no interests. Someone might have interest in Physics but if he figure out availability of jobs in this area is low compared to other ones then he could choose different field where he is not interested. This will badly impact in his future endeavor as well. He will generally loose concentration in a disinterested area of study. In consequences , he will not get enough skills which can drive him into trouble to get a job as well.
In conclusion, there always have availability jobs in any field of study , some areas might have trends that doesn't mean everyone should follow that. In fact , such trends can be dimmed anytime. So, college student shouldn't only base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86096256684 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6505392 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7725106945 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552210457809 0.243740707755 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198731246922 0.0831039109588 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.212846900011 0.0758088955206 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364653219637 0.150359130593 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223297123125 0.0667264976115 335% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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