A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
I agree with the statement " A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college". I didn't find any conflicting arguments or assumptions in that, because ultimatley it's nation which shapes any student career and make sure they mould in a correct way. In order to have a strong foundation for each student nation should maintain same national curriculum.
If we look at any comptetive exams it will have specific syllabus on which students have to concentrate. For instance lets consider a nation wide exam JEE Mains which is comptetive exam in india. It follows a specific pattern for which students has to incur some basic fundamentals. If all students have the same curriculum it would be easier for any exam to be conducted for testing students. This statement provides evidence in favor of the issue. Until college level students will have only basic knowledge which will be enough to get into colleges- Students has to expand their knowledge from then.
Lets consider what if students didn't study the same national curriculum- Different students have different knowledge and it will be more difficult to unite them in any social issues. Studying the same curriculum will inculcate unity of thought in students, which in result allows them to think about any issues in a similar way. Same national curriculum provides the student with whats happening in their nation and what are the trending careers they can opt for their intellectual growth. Youth is the greatest strength of any country. If students have conflicting curriculums, nation will face difficulties to provide them nice future. For instance consider basic maths if different curriculum have difficult maths level. Students couldn't know on whihc they has to focus.
Therefore, nations way of having same curriculum would be advantageous to students in shaping their career and provides expansion of their knowledge by giving proper foundation for the students.
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...rn for which students has to incur some basic fundamentals. If all students have the same curricul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23987538941 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72854873743 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492211838006 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0205643131 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9411764706 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441030700762 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154629056038 0.0831039109588 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169398706563 0.0758088955206 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308918421641 0.150359130593 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199682659176 0.0667264976115 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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