"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
I support the opinion of "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large" , ultimately all corporations goal is to make more profits- In order to make more profits corporations indulges in negative means to achieve their desire.
I wanted to support my view by presenting an evidence to my opinion. For instance consider a multinational company is striving for its profits- It looks for its way to make it, let us consider recruiting more inexperienced employees to make a show to the clients that they had numerous resources to make a desirable. But in reality they recruit less skilled employees to pay less and terminates more experienced people- In this way employees future getting ruined. If we look at a bigger picture negative effects are dominating positive effects.
Other means of getting profits involves through false advertising- even though the company's product have much features but corporate people make fake publicity which attracts customer more and adversely influences other companies to follow the same path which results in spreading unhealthy environment to the society.
Desire of corporations to maximize profits creates a competitive environment which initially will be a good start but slowly that desire leads to follow illegal means because until then corporations experiences profits but all of a sudden if they have less, profits will make them think in such a way that some or the other way they want to make profits ,in result less quality products will get produced.
I conclude saying that anything in limit is fine but beyond that, will definitely make negative difference which will happen in view of the opinion stated above. That desire for anything makes the company or person to follow the illegal means and as a result general welfare of the nation will be at stake.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ral welfare of the nation at large' , ultimately all corporations goal is to ...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
... nation at large' , ultimately all corporations goal is to make more profits- In order ...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is way employees future getting ruined. If we look at a bigger picture negative ef...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...- even though the companys product have much features but corporate people make fake...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the other way they want to make profits ,in result less quality products will get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17915309446 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78577483057 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.272792633 60.3974514979 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.666666667 118.986275619 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 23.4991977007 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208516973598 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887244954199 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873329463054 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129839771997 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096291734384 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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