Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Political leaders are lionized in any country and plays a major part in country's development, So according to my opinion leaders make rules and people follow them, Indeed due to inveterate protocols followed by the country, leaders should follow those protocols. The most essential quality of the leader should be the persuasion: the quality of convincing others. This attribute alone makes leader to stand out uniquely in crowd. I support the statement that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise.
Firstly, we should understand the meaning of a leader, so leader is the one who understands public problems and opinions and takes action according to them. For example consider Nelson Mandela who is a great leader of our time, who fought for the black people. The leader comes from the people within and understands their problems and represents the people needs in the form of his actions. A leader is people's representative. When he cannot listen to public opinion and perform the actions accordingly, it is illogical to call him a leader.
Contrasting the other view, if leader remains consistently with the principles and objectives how can he address the people? and how can he be a good leader? Supporting to my point in the first paragraph which mentioned about persuasion a leader must inhibit this quality. However, without such major attribute how can leaders form the government? Yes it is true that they should follow certain protocols to satisfy the people's need but without yielding to their needs he can't stand out as a leader.
A political leaders are the ones who form the government, Indeed people choose them as their leader to lead them in a positive way. When they have so much authority to control the government cannot they change their principles for the sake of the people? This question makes the other position of the given issue falls apart. This supports our claim that effective leaders must yield to the public opinion.
I conclude saying that any country's development is based on the government and the people in that country, whereas government is nothing but political leaders. Therefore for the sake of the people a leader should listen to the public opinion and persuade the government to get things happen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03100775194 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66278286172 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485788113695 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8874733776 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.35 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414494093952 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144940893919 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105684091664 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239804770651 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808281472697 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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