Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology has becoming the significant thing in human life by providing more comfort and less overhead. Definitely, we should agree technology has been playing an important role where nature is not an exception to it. The environmental problems arise when human activities effects the nature which has nothing to do with technology. Technology makes life easier but not save the environment which should lies within the humans.
Firstly, the environmental problems are harmful effects of human activities like deforestation, population, water pollution, over fishing, plastic usage and etc. These activities are purely done consciously and clearly by knowing their effects because that is what urban development demands. For example let us take urban areas which are highly populated with people, buildings and all where we can hardly find a tree and when the population keeps on increasing it is highly likely to develop the surrounding area which leads to deforestation. So, all the harmful activities are done by human in which technology has nothing to impact.
Furthermore, technologies responsibility is to make human's life comfort. The main uses of it can be identifying the root cause of the issues we are facing. It can provide suggestions on how to solve the problems but it would not solve it. It can predict the future how deteroirating it would be in the future which may make so many people to realize and would to the harmful activities
Finally, the government should take lead to solve these kind of problems and I don't think technology would resolve the issue. According to me, It can only provide the information regarding the root cause of problems but, cannot solve the issues which are associated with our activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...he government should take lead to solve these kind of problems and I dont think technology...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ink technology would resolve the issue. According to me, It can only provide the information re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20567375887 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91395301557 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6609358177 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140772788485 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558176017451 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037520133932 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911160712376 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352285573524 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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