The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.
I would like to discuss the issue by mentioning a proverb "today's children are tomorrow's citizen" by expanding this view, Leadership comes from the person who has profound knowledge or experience in any field. Obviously, society has the responsibility to edify the young people in the righteous way , Indeed according to my view good leadership skills comes from cooperation, so I would like to support the claim.
Firstly, in this running world where young people are depending on technologies for even trivial task, although parents teaches them ethics and manners but ultimately young people has to learn from the society about good and bad things. We should agree with the statement that in this technological world everything will run on competition but not cooperation but up to some extent only- this thing should be realized by the younger people.
Secondly, cooperation makes younger people to unite on something and to perpetually work on it. The main quality of a leader is to have this kind of nature to lead any company, industry, or may be government. A leader is a person who should communicate with people at ease and has to understand their situations in order to solve it- and a person with cooperation of his/her group members can face any situation with strong will power and solves it easily.
Finally, I would like to disagree with the sense of competition because it will only be helpful if younger people want to become business man but not a good leader- competition will work in the business world to make more profits but it will not add advantages for becoming a leader.
To conclude, I would say the positive nature will make any person strong and can lead well- that kind of positive nature will come in the sense of cooperation but not in competition. Young people should always have the cooperation to make nation, industry, or any company better in every aspect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...fy the young people in the righteous way , Indeed according to my view good leader...
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...n this running world where young people are depending on technologies for even trivial task, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g on technologies for even trivial task, although parents teaches them ethics and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77649779181 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4467534281 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.7 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153331593253 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646289209135 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410084746471 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816450241893 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307052928231 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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