A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
united we stand. this suggested that if our perception towards a situation is similar, we will be doing good. and education plays a crucial role in that. The prompt suggested that all students should study same curriculum . I strongly agree with the prompt and will discuss the reasoning with some factors
To begin, national curriculum is created with the thought process that all students should know about nation`s culture, history, ethics, morals and for that matter
research had been done to make it informative . and when students read that curriculum , they got the feeling of nationalism, they feel proud for their country.
and subconsciously they want to do something good for their nation. and become an asset for the growth of the nation. and when they are enough motivated to do some thing good for their country then they can choose their field in which they can excel and make their nations proud.
Perhaps when all students learn about their heroes from the past and what they did for their country, they will feel somehow connected not matter from which part of the country they are. they all feel united. for instance during general discussion ,they all can relate to one another, because everybody knows about the part and resulting healthy discussion. And also to make a strong building ,foundation must be strong and education in the schools creates the foundation of students, which will help them in future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06276150628 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45820191244 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 77.751919248 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0769230769 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271902499475 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992053410099 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747963857144 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155401234143 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391367687438 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.