"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The memorandum states that late night news decreases local and weather news time and increases national news time.Now argument is that if previously time slot is given to weather and local channel then the number of viewers increases.The evidence which strengthen this argument are as follows
The intensity of complaints rises from viewers that are related to station coverage of local news and weather news that shows that local people want to watch local news and weather updates more than the national news.because they want to update with the weather forecast and also local news.which are essential for their daily schedules.
Secondly as the advertisements are given by local businessmen so obviously they are targeting local customers. but though less local viewers watching channel so this marketing strategy is not working resulting advertisers are not interested in continue their contracts .
Now when the previously time slot are reestablished of local and weather news resulting monetary gains, as advertisement contracts will come again, and also local viewers again show their interest as local news and weather updates are shown which also attract more viewers. so we can say that evidence are strengthen the argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 55.5748502994 22% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 2260.96107784 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 441.139720559 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65284974093 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.56307096286 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71351976212 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 705.55239521 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.8473053892 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.275661861 57.8364921388 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.2 119.503703932 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6 23.324526521 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.70786347227 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36625307498 0.218282227539 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15112452453 0.0743258471296 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156958746489 0.0701772020484 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238654830595 0.128457276422 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115098949892 0.0628817314937 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 14.3799401198 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 48.3550499002 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.197005988 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.5979740519 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32208582834 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 98.500998004 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 12.3882235529 428% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.1389221557 154% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 11.9071856287 210% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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