A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

For any nation students are the future of that nation. And the most important thing is to educate each and every students for the better development of a nation. Nowadays, due to increase in number of educational institutions the competition among these institutions has reached pinnacle. In addition to this, due to increasing competition the schools are trying to vary the curriculum and deceives the parents to get more intake of students and hence earn more money. It is a well developed business tactics and strategy that is being used by schools.

The issue here cities about the requirement of same curriculum among all schools until students enter college. Every nation has variety of traditions, religions, and languages. So, having same curriculum over whole nation is fallacious. In countries like india, the language varies every few hundred kilometer. Due to difference in the language the same curriculum can not be enforced every where within nation.

Furthermore, the literacy rate also varies from state to state, hence implementing same course structure is not a good idea. Consider again countries like india, where there are different boards for education, like CBSE, RBSE, GBSE. Each state has its own course structure which facilitate the educations board. However, there is also a central board (CBSE) in india which is ubiquitous over nation.

The advantage of having the same curriculum is that all students can be treated equally and education is equal right of every child. In addition, there will be no need to create separate conducting boards for different curriculum and wasting resources like time, money and obviously human effort.

However, there is a trade off here, whether to have same curriculum or different. It should depend on the country, i.e if a country is small, then prefer the same curriculum and if country is large (large differences in language and culture) then prefer different curriculum.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 312.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26282051282 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73842522544 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 705.55239521 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.983258515 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.324526521 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327783265228 0.218282227539 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10442242188 0.0743258471296 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10164365093 0.0701772020484 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168043439574 0.128457276422 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107931273287 0.0628817314937 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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