Men and women, because of there inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

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Men and women, because of there inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

Nowadays, the partiality between men and women is degraging. The issue here cities the inequality in the tasks for men and women due to their inherent physical differences. It is true that women are not suited for some tasks, but it is also that men are also not suited for certain tasks.

Yes, there are physical difference between men and women, men are likely to be much stronger. However, women can also be stronger and can do the same tasks as men can do. The major reason behind this discrimination is the earlier thinking of society, that women can not work they should stay at home and should not work. All men and woman should have equal rights, why to differentiate between gender. Whole humanity should be treated equally.

Women have started to overcome the barriers that society has sets and they have proved that they are also capable of doing all tasks that men can do. Todays women are fighter pilots, armies, they have even being in space. Futhermore, some womens have even excelled in sports, like serena williams, sania mirza.

However, these differences can be seen in positive way and this can help in motivating womens to prove that they are capable for everything. By proving there side, they can also inspire the next generations of women. To illustrate futher, think of example of sunita williams and kalpana chawla, who where one of the first women in space from india. This can lead to increase in the preset limits on women.

In conclusion, beacuse of above reasons, women should treat equally with men. There are physical differences but they are capable of doing things.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, in conclusion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 2235.4752809 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85144927536 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36397148114 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6000191054 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7647058824 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309315299254 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111120951756 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101791065824 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200961478003 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153843331582 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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