In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
In years to come, it is going to be a challenging task to produce the cars with the rate at which today are being produced as in few decades we are going to almost exhaust our natural resources. However, I disagree with the statement that there will be fewer cars in use after twenty years than today because of the following three reasons.
First of all, the world population is increasing at alarming rate and hence more the number of people, more will be the number of cars usage. For instance, if there are two brothers in family each with 2 children, then each of the children will have different cars, which increases the number of car count from 2 to 4. This particular trend will continue until we find a new transport system.
Secondly, with years the cars are becoming much cheaper and efficient due to advancement in technology. For example, a car with a mileage of 15 miles for 1-liter fuel that used to be prized for around 30,000 dollars now cost at 10,000 dollars. In addition, the manufacturing cost per car is also reducing as whole system of car production is being automated requiring minimal human intervention and effort.
Finally, with the potential advanced technologies, flying cars will be come into existence in coming years, which again will lead to increase in number of cars being used. In fact, many companies have already tested this technology and a few companies have shown promising results. The demand for these flying cars is certainly going to increase, which will further reduce the price of ground car and hence, in turn more people will buy low cost cars.
In conclusion, the demand for cars is increasing at a very high rate and will be increasing in future as well with the future high technologies to come. Hence, the above three points opposes the claim that in twenty year the cars usage is going to drop.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73846153846 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49945035378 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.0507800395 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 5.45110844103 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424815687406 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154418575153 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134534136952 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242817976214 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122807557811 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73846153846 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49945035378 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.0507800395 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 5.45110844103 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424815687406 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154418575153 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134534136952 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242817976214 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122807557811 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.