“A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Undoubtedly, education is the backbone of any country's economy and its prosperity. It is very important to have a structured way of learning so that it encapsulate students with all the necessary things one should learn in their pre-college. School is a place where a student gets to know about various things about science, technology, sports and many more. Not only students get to know this aspects but they start developing an interest in one of the many fields. As each student is unique in every aspect it should be not be mandatory to learn the same curriculum throughout his school.
Firstly, any nation should be free to select any type of curriculum but it should take care of its dynamism. If a student is more interested in sports than in science and technology, he or she should be allowed to invest more time in that particular field. As we all know the great cricketer Sachin Tendulkar was never a bright student as of the curriculum was concerned but he was the brightest in his field which was cricket. So instead of paying heed to unnecessary subjects which was compulsory by the curriculum, he opted to follow his passion.
Moreover, a nation's curriculum should be based on the needs of the future hour.Having said this, it should not limit any student from having a different career prospective. Ever wondered why an engineer in his school life needs to learn about biological aspects and about various botanical things? Most of us would say YES!Basic knowledge about such
things is important but there is no need to waste our time on it getting into the details of it. Having a same national curriculum also affects the job opportunities, because each student will have the same skill set as of others .That should not be the case as for the overall development of the country, there is a requirement of mastery in
all the fields of life.
However, having a same national curriculum might be beneficial for some developing countries. As they have multiple fields to still explore,it can prove beneficial in some ways. As the nation is developing it has ample of job opportunities in various fields so having a curriculum which would enable the student to at least get a decent job would be a good thing.
But again each student is unique, there should be no compulsion of taking a course or a subject which does not interest the student in a least way. That would be mere wastage of time.
Lastly, the curriculum also depends on the economy of the nation to some extent.Whether they are able to offer the dynamism which is dependent on their economy. So it is not a good idea to have same national curriculum till college, rather each student be allowed to choose from his interests in any field.As overall development means to develop a country in all aspects which should be the prime goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...any more. Not only students get to know this aspects but they start developing an in...
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... an interest in one of the many fields. As each student is unique in every aspect ...
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...to follow his passion. Moreover, a nations curriculum should be based on the needs...
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...anical things? Most of us would say YES!Basic knowledge about such things is impor...
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...he economy of the nation to some extent.Whether they are able to offer the dynamism whi...
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... choose from his interests in any field.As overall development means to develop a ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... choose from his interests in any field.As overall development means to develop a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, as for, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2354.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79429735234 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71706305243 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464358452138 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8950612061 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.7 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.55 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224891478811 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770764028376 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499384552591 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117036113565 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468596289467 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.