a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is playing vital role for an individual.The overall development is based on eduacation only.Education helping the society to sustain in this world.To support education schools ,colleges are established.And the people are taking admissions into these schools for their overall development.School provides a wide array of subjects into their curriculum.
In the statement author assert that a nation should require to put the same curriculum
until students enter colllege.I am totally agree with this statement.If the curriculum is same then all the people from rural area can also have an opportunity to learn the same things as the students in metro cities are learning.So irrespective of a place ,rural students also getting equal quality of education.So there is really no difference
in the rual and metropolitian student as both learns the same syllabus.
Furthermore,If the curriculumn is same irrespective of geographical location,castes ,people have same opportunity to learn the same things so when those students enters into colleges there will be no differences amongst the students because everyone has the same level of base.So if this so rural areas students can also compete with the metro cities students.
In the conclusion,nation should need for all its students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter college,that will actually helping in the overall development of the nation only
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65137614679 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29186853494 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 23.0359550562 234% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.754232425 60.3974514979 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 308.0 118.986275619 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.5 23.4991977007 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.21951772744 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386948135228 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.271190254149 0.0831039109588 326% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225628760367 0.0758088955206 298% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233436966831 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197698161133 0.0667264976115 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 14.1392134831 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 48.8420337079 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 12.1639044944 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 11.2143820225 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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