Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
The nature is the real wealth gifted to the human kind. The nature is responsible to provide each living beings the product of their need. The endangerment of such a vital property may result in questioning the existance of human kind in future. It is responsibility of us to preserve nature in its natural form and laws must be imposed in order to ensure it is followed. Though, I firmly agree that without preserving nature life will no more reside in future, but, the fact that economic advancement expect some sort of usage of environment. But, this will not harm if we put on certain limits on usage of natural reserviors.
The nature is one beautiful and precious gift anyone have even got in their life. It acts as a provider, teacher and sooth in hard times. The nature provides us with huge contents of reserviors such as food, water, shelter, fire, protection and many more. The human evolved by advancing in his field of interest with the help of resources provided by nature. The human is always keen to discover the varied mysteries of nature and still is not able to find much. The nature acts as a protector from extinction of most of the species by keeping a balancing among the living beings. Thus, it becomes extremely necessary to preserve the nature in its original form to avoid worse consequences.
The living beings depend on nature to fulfill its daily necessity. The fact is that nature can only provide to fulfill the necessity of beings, but may not in case of greed. The human activities had lead to extinction of many species and useful plants. At the current scenario, one can find en-numerous endangered species. These represents the culture and heritage of the nation, thus, need to be preserved. It attracts the wealth in the form of visitors and researchers. A cartoon named as Tarzen in one of its episode has beautifully carved this possibility after extinction of such endangered species due to excessive industrial activities. Thus, limiting advancement activities is necessary to avoid loosing the endanger species.
The human since past is known for his innovative thoughts, different insight and implementing new ideas. The activities of the human have gained him high technological advancement, new ways to make life better and proper usage of the wealth. This was not possible it the nature did not provide the human with its precious resources to carry out his experimentation. The scientist Mary Curry worked on the uranium, one of the precious metal found on the lands of Earth. If such metal was not provided to her by nature, the study was not possible atall. Thus, making use of natural resources is not a sin, but, need to put a limit for the usage.
At the end, the conclusion that rises from the discussion is to preserve the nature in its natural state is equally important as to carry out innovatice advancement. The nature must be preserved for the future generations to experience, learn and observe its beauty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iving beings the product of their need. The endangerment of such a vital property m...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...questioning the existance of human kind in future. It is responsibility of us to preserve...
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Line 1, column 452, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...serving nature life will no more reside in future, but, the fact that economic advancemen...
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Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... one beautiful and precious gift anyone have even got in their life. It acts as a pr...
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Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e help of resources provided by nature. The human is always keen to discover the va...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ure and still is not able to find much. The nature acts as a protector from extinct...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f beings, but may not in case of greed. The human activities had lead to extinction...
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Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: LOOSING_EFFORTRECORDSEASON[1]
Message: Did you mean 'losing the'?
Suggestion: losing the
...cement activities is necessary to avoid loosing the endanger species. The human since past...
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Line 3, column 712, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ctivities is necessary to avoid loosing the endanger species. The human since past is known...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, thus, as to, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2464.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85039370079 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73793352596 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492125984252 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 800.1 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 19.0 4.99550561798 380% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6564717928 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.9655172414 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5172413793 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86206896552 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168736152022 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456527654801 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473711612704 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104064870254 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434529194367 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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