Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
It's safe to say that we "homo-sapiens" aren't the only living specific on Earth. Though, we are the smartest, most advanced and complex organisms sitting on top of the food chain. All this doesn't give us the right to curtail wilderness around us for own egotistical benifits.
As nations should work towards preseving the remaining wilderness in their natural state, whatever that is left of it. flaura and fauna maintain cyclic ecological balance necessessry for survival on Earth. Plants offer us what is cradinal for our survival: Oxygen ; consequently, take in and convert Carbon dioxide maintaining an equilibrium. There is no denying on the deletrious ways in which humans have expanded stemming out everything on our path to amend it to our needs.
Wilderness accounts for the natual habitat or home as we may call for a plethora of organisms whom outside their natural habitat will cease to exist. Our insensitiveness has already brought about abundent harm on them; Spurious species have ceased to exist in the name of developing the nation. Our narcissicm have no bound, curtailing the nature and bending it to our needs; to an extent that we have to create artificial zoo's and prison the speicies providing them a sense of cloistered nataure while cataclysmically uprooting their homes.
Nowithstanding the disbalance, with the burgeoning our of society we do need room foster the everincreasing growth, however, it is time that we start barinstroming towards concocting ways to be environment friendly while meeting the needs of the people. There have many environmentalist reforms laid out to curb our inhumane tendencies towards the nature and bolster the need towards restoring the natural balance. Famous comdian/actor Ellen championed the safety of endengered Gurella's endemic to South Africa raising awareness in order to save a beautiful from getting extinct.
As developed/developing nations, leaders should come together and pass laws to keep what we call natural and the host of organisms that belong to the wilderness which otherwise would be confined to artifical coffins emulating the very nature we destroyed with our own hands.
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There have been an imbalance…
There has been an imbalance in the state of equilibrium of the ecosystem, as a result of improper management and conservation of its natural resources. Conservation has played an important role in preserving natural resources and ensuring that it does not lose its original nature. If laws are being made to preserve the remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, what impact do they have on the economy's gain? There is need for the ecosystem which comprises of living organisms interacting with their physical environment to maintain a state of stable equilibrium.
The era of Industrialization has led species going extinct thereby causing them to become endangered. Human activities such as deforestation, agricultural practices like irrigation, and illegal hunting and kill of wildlife has been a contributing factor to the extinction of these species, so it is important for government agencies to pass laws in order to regulate and establish a well-managed conservation center.
In Nigeria, there are conservation centers aimed at protecting the interest of endangered wildlife. Such conservation centers include; Yankari reserve park in Bauchi states, Okomu reserve at Edo state, Old Oyo reserve in Oyo state, Akure forest reserve, Lekki Conservation center and several others.
Every country has laws that regulates and guides the people living in it, hence it is an ideal plan for government agencies to formulate laws governing the protection of wildlife. Such laws should prevent deforestation of trees, illegal hunting and killing of animals, and recycling of natural resources that would be beneficial to the economic growth.
However, the preservation of wildlife in their various habitats has therefore established a stable ecosystem equilibrium, thus helping the economic gain in areas through the preservation of biodiversity and its natural resources, maintaining ecosystem balance, provision of long-term benefits and in scientific research.
Many people do not realize the effects of the lack of conservation as it has really tampered with the ecosystem leading to extinction of valuable species and depletion of the ecosystem. An example of ecosystem depletion is the ozone layer depletion caused by burning of fossil fuels and hydrocarbon substances which releases CFC( Chlorofluoro carbon) into the atmosphere resulting to global warming and also the cutting down of trees can cause the species present in its natural habitat to be displaced leading to their extinction. Therefore, people should be enlightened on the importance of in-situ and ex-situ conservation which is an essential aspect of conserving wild-life in their various habitats.
Establishing a conservation center is one thing but when laws are not passed on the system, such system cannot work. The need to formulate laws is essential to the economy as it would serve as a solid ground in generating revenue for the government and also can be used as source of tourism for expatriates to carry out their various research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34693877551 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17475933089 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623906705539 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.113710277 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174149862102 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059730804222 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736910178111 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981947636022 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563880954779 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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