Progress of scientific research hallmarks social advancement and symbolizes civilization of human beings pushed forward. Advancement of some studies is accomplished by experts inside the field. However, from a panoramic view, some studies should be based on persistent dedication of experts in a certain field without any influence of outside-field knowledge and experience, however, some studies must be established on integration of inside and outside background knowledge and experience.
In pure physical study, nobody needs to utilize art or politics to explore enigma of physical world, instead, study achievements are constructed only on the accumulation of scientific knowledge and experience of scientists. Tangential knowledge does not help. For example, Albert Einstein, although he was fascinated in playing violin and painting in his spare time, was engrossed in tackling physical mystery. The Discovery of Gravity was not inspired by art or political philosophy but relentless observation of nature and surroundings owing that art, politics, and science are absolutely separated and unrelated.
However, in art world, artists should be equipped with more creativities and inspiration derived from other fields. Although artists need to learn the painting theory and techniques, they must deliver a works topic closely reflecting beauty and darkness of life. For example, Guernica painted by Picasso is the most typical masterpiece themed with fighting against Nazi regime. This works can be reckoned as the aspirational and courageous demonstration to the whole world who should fight against Adolf Hitler and end the war and brutal holocaust. The combination of politics and cubism is clearly shown that art works need cooperation of experience and knowledge from outside the field by Picasso. Art is a media which should be visualized by artists with sensitiveness of current situation.
In addition, a good movie director must be a good screenwriter, therefore, they must have the facility of writing and then will shoot an overnight sensational movie. Besides, it can avoid the dilemma of dissonance between scripts and movies and dissatisfiedly get not acclaim from viewers. For example, Quentin Tarantino always writes films and then directs them, because his writing is maverick and singular with nonlinear storylines, satirical subject with an aestheticization of violence, his movies composed by his own screenwriting have garnered both critical and commercial success. Django Unchained is the nomination film in the 85th Academy Awards, with violent scenes between slaves and slavers and with discrimination and justice. Only by writing this story by himself did he know how to shoot this movie the most vivid and thrilling. Therefore, as good movie directors, they must have qualifications of writing impressive stories.
In conclusion, the topic should be discussed by different perspectives. Physicists and chemists do not require to grasp the knowledge and experience from outside the field because researches in these fields are detached away from other fields; However, virtuosos in art field such as painters and movie directors must be armed with more profound sophistication in other fields because art needs to be materialized by stories from life where all fields are attached.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'works'' or 'work's'?
Suggestion: works'; work's
...ory and techniques, they must deliver a works topic closely reflecting beauty and dar...
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Line 5, column 708, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
...om outside the field by Picasso. Art is a media which should be visualized by artists w...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'grasping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: grasping
... Physicists and chemists do not require to grasp the knowledge and experience from outsi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2826.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 501.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64071856287 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05431487037 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 863.1 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0416968101 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246880569668 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673780759205 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10180752284 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151279955904 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112769545221 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 167.0 100.480337079 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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