“People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, but when they refrain from exercising it.”
Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on the statement above. In writing your essay, you should consider both when the statement may be true and when it may be false.
A powerful person is one who has the authority to impose, discipline, kill or save individual, or people collectively. Some may agree that respect is given back to the powerful when the use of power is being displayed. But another will argue that respect truly comes when the powerful has the opportunity to use power, but resist from using it. After weighing the two possibilities, I strongly believe that respect is earned when the powerful refuse to use the power to command respect.
As Powerful as Jesus was during his life time, he earned respect not by the use of the power, but by submission. Jesus Christ is known to have power to command, destroy, kill and so on. But the point at which he earned respect unanimously was when he refused to use the power to make things work for his pleasure, but for the good of others. To be powerful and be submissive thrill people and brings along Unfeign respect.
Abraham Lincoln command respect as the president of America when he refused to use his power against the request of the people, but made it an avenue to consider their request. When people opinions are considered as important, it bring about an avenue for them to deeply respect the giver of the opportunity knowingfully that they cannot question the authority, if the reverse is the case.
Even if it may seem that those who use their power to make things happen command respect; example is the like of Adolf Hitler, who used his power to command people for world colonization, but history has shown that those who are truly respected are those who submitted to the offer of people instead of using their power to impose on the people.
In conclusion, it is a saying that “respect is reciprocal”, so when the powerful repsect the perspective of others, the powerful will also earn Respect.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...idual, or people collectively. Some may agree that respect is given back to the power...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...t. As Powerful as Jesus was during his life time, he earned respect not by the use of th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...pinions are considered as important, it bring about an avenue for them to deeply resp...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73734177215 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58012715983 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48417721519 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3315066903 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266800123805 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129491663271 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464357814296 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177829981418 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466382291961 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...idual, or people collectively. Some may agree that respect is given back to the power...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...t. As Powerful as Jesus was during his life time, he earned respect not by the use of th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...pinions are considered as important, it bring about an avenue for them to deeply resp...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73734177215 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58012715983 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48417721519 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3315066903 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266800123805 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129491663271 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464357814296 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177829981418 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466382291961 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.