“People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, but when they refrain from exercising it.”
Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on the statement above. In writing your essay, you should consider both when the statement may be true and when it may be false.
In what occasions do people revere powerful people the most? Is it when the exercise the power in their custody or when they decide to reserve such power? Although one might want to argue that people respect those who do not exercise their power more, however, a profound reflection of the argument shows that people tend to venerate those who make use of the power in their custody more. Moreover, when power is not being put to use, it is as good as not being powerful at all.
Only a few situations like when there is an altercation between a man (who is generally considered to have more strength) and a lady (who is considered to have less power) is shying away from making use of such power/strength considered a respectable act. Even at that, some people would argue that such a man is not “manly” enough and might call such a man derogative names. Therefore, even in such a situation, the respect in such an act is subjective.
The police, for example, have the power to maintain law and other in the society. Negligence from exercising such power would end of making the police force look like toothless dogs, and subsequently lose the respect they are supposed to command from all and sundry. For example, in the case of a riot, the police is expected to be on ground to quench the riot and make the environment peaceful and calm as quick as possible by the exercising of their power. If the police decides not to take actions, both the rioters and the peace abiding citizens would respect the police less. In such situations, using the power in the police’s capacity would increase the respect that the society would accord them.
Political leaders are also deemed as powerful in the society and the society gives them such power and prestige so that they can put it into use in order to move the society forward. If the political leaders decide not to use the power given to them, they would lose the respect being accorded to them by the society and might even end up losing the power totally. In conclusion, just like the case of police and political leaders, people tend to accord more respect to people who exercise the power they have.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61558441558 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42238395058 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438961038961 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7425374438 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282643857361 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118497238942 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870228839011 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187036527822 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742805325578 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.