Today, the world solve most of the problems very efficiently and effectively with the help of enhanced technologies. The given argument states that peoples relies on technology to solve problems and the ability of humans to think themselves will leads to deterioration. Here, the argument forgot to consider the fact that the technologies are developed by humans through thinking in various ways to solve a intricate real world problems.
Technology improvement helps in various fields like Mobile device, Network, Marketing, Engineering, Medical etc. The Wireless Communication technology enhance the mobile devices to communicate and share information effectively. Even when the distance between sender and receiver is high that the Wireless Communication ensures the performance as same as when the sender and receiver nearer to each other. The technology called Bluetooth allows the mobile device to create a network to share the information. For example, a group of people can share images, audios, videos.
Initially, the Computers were used to perform mathematical calculations. Now the Computers are used to solve complicated problems which makes the humans very easy to work, saves lot of time. We can also share the resources and informations by
connecting the computers through network. The development of Search Engine allows anyone can learn anything from the Internet which will enable the people to learn from their comfortable zone. Online Transactions enables the people to transfer money in a very easiest way.
These are all the technologies were developed by ability of humans to solve problem and create an effective solution. That solution has become universal solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...lity of humans to think themselves will leads to deterioration. Here, the argument fo...
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Line 1, column 406, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rough thinking in various ways to solve a intricate real world problems. Techn...
^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... share the resources and informations by connecting the computers through network...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57915057915 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95825973612 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7336358124 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181880980108 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572260697157 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639532787301 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953223116974 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592469978016 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.