The manager of the WWAC radio station has observed that the number of listener to their music has decreased. So, the manager has decided to change the current rock-music format. The author’s mentioned evidences are having less potential to make a decision that to change their current rock-music format. So, the author should provide an evidence that should have the capacity to make a decision in a divergent aspects which will concern the future development.
First, the manager specifies that the number of listener has declined despite population growth. Here, the radio station should consider the statistical information about the time at which they are broadcasting the channel, because in the day time many of the peoples like adults, youngsters are busy with their works, and school respectively. So, the radio station should take into the consideration that before going to change the format of the music.
Second, The radio station wants to make the new residents to listen their music. So, the radio station needs to switch the music format according to their tastes. But, the radio station should consider the proper time at which they have to broadcast their music. Because, the peoples who are new residents coming to broadcasting location after their retirement. So, there may be a conflict between that adults and youngsters in their tastes. Hence, the radio station should consider the timing of broadcasting.
Third, The manager consider that if there is a continuing decline in the local sales of music which indicates limited interest in music. So, the manager has decided to broadcast news and talks shows based on the radio channel which is increasingly popular in their area. This is an another flaw that this will not ensure the increase in their listeners count. Because, if the channel shows similar news and talks like an another channel, the people may not get tedious.
Finally, I would like to conclude that, if the radio channel make something new activities instead of similar to other radio channel there may be a chance of increasing the listeners. And, they should consider the appropriate time to broadcast music, news, talk shows etc.
Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 356 350
No. of Characters: 1771 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.344 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.975 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.485 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.737 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.003 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.365 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 416, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'aspect'?
Suggestion: aspect
...acity to make a decision in a divergent aspects which will concern the future developme...
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Line 6, column 280, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a flaw' or 'another flaw'.
Suggestion: a flaw; another flaw
...easingly popular in their area. This is an another flaw that this will not ensure the increase ...
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Line 6, column 419, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a channel' or 'another channel'.
Suggestion: a channel; another channel
...annel shows similar news and talks like an another channel, the people may not get tedious. Fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, may, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 356.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15168539326 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56376205985 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443820224719 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.76447105788 171% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9127827717 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5263157895 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.70786347227 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224343522294 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949582662847 0.0743258471296 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858987867401 0.0701772020484 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137308586462 0.128457276422 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738743767478 0.0628817314937 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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