Technology is the new revolution.It not only makes our work faster but helps in carrying out trivial job in shortcut way and with high efficacy.Use of technology is found in travelling from place to place or doing high calculation in computers.People may have different opinion about using technology but I am not consonant with the topic.
To begin,technology has solely brought about a lot of poitive changes in this century.Whatever things were imposiible before are easily done with technological development. New problems have been arising in this modern age and human are searching for those method which requires less manpower and the work is done with high accuracy. Such convoluted jobs are easily carried out by nano computers. Medical sector also had been burgeon with technological developments.
Furthermore,technology not only mitigate the human work but also plays a crucial role in inovating new ideas. Development of new technology requires new ideas and innovation which are fulfilled only by human being. Technological development had led people in prosperous way of life.Human being are able to reach moon, study about different other planets, about the past history through fossil and many more.Technology works as assitant for the work guided by human being. Drone , electrical cars are some example created by human being. Computer is nothing unless it is run by human being.
Moreover,human being relying on technology for solving problem does not deteriorate their thinking capacity infact it will ameliorate the work. Because people need to have better ideas in creating machines and runing them. Efficacy of human being has led to a enormous change in their life through technology. Not only these, every sector of society and nation are joined through this. Technology and human being converge at one point.Steve job, founder of apple company once said that "A human being who is one of the most inefficient animals on the planet becomes the most efficient one when he/she is provided with a computer".
For all these reason,I believe that depending upon technology will not deteriorate the human capacity of thinking infact more innovative ideas and possibilities are brought up.The emperical examples are clearly visible around us. More revolutionary things are yet to come through the creative minds of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40379403794 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09127758025 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9326653956 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.294117647 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202681906657 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642690416338 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447697761228 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114731838382 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233725242351 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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