Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
In this 21st century people in the world are connected to every other person via intenet. For a rumor or scandal to spread, it does not take much of time;either it is true or its is fake. Dupe people believe in this scandals but intelligent dont.Scandals just pretend to show fake news.In strongly deny that scandals are not useful else they are very disturbing factor which is explained in further essay.Scandals just pretend to show fake news .
People are always in hurry in this copmetative world. They dont have time to specify the thing they heard or read so they easily believe on what they hear or what they observe at once. Scandals are spread around without any basis and those scandals are heard or read by people and they easily rely on those fake things. Some people are expert in spreading fake news and stories just to make ownselff popular or to have fun. People usually trust on online news nowdays.
Interesting topics are always choosen to make those scandals and we start follwing that.One such incident has happened in my context too. When I was in my undegraduate level, I heard a news taht our scienece teacher went missing and he had done something bad to himself. This spread like a cloud in our school and everyone started believing it, but it turn out to be a scandal as he has went for a family vacation. But if we listen to a prominent speaker we can know the truth.Only they can deliever what is happening now in our world.
Scandlas not only waste our time but they create different kinds of problem in society or in country. These fake news draw unwanted attention towards them. "The world is ending in this day" this statement had drawn a lot people attention back 4years ago.Many people were mentally disturbed by this kinds of news but it proved to be wrong although it drew a lot of attention and created a lot of problem. but such kind of statement didnt came over by a renowed or cogent person.
By creating fake news and scandals our problems are not solved instead they keep on growing. Scandals only focus on creating unnecessary attention towards it. Only a true and prominent news should be believed which draws our attention to what is happening in the current world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68702290076 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45461260456 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52417302799 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9122861098 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9473684211 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.68421052632 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205501192838 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661380068153 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571982390945 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124755722003 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490090638524 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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