Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It has been said that no society flourishes without the involvement of every individual residing in the society. Every person has their own responsibilities towards shaping society either they may be young or adults as well as elderly people. While some may agree with the statement that young people have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole, I refute with this statement. In the following essay, I have explained several reasons for my statement.
Firstly, it is of utter importance of every individual to think about the betterment of society-to think how the status of society can be uplifted. There is no regulation of age and limit for decision making social benefit. I believe that young people have a lot of influence on the decision for the future of society. The older generation is not giving chance for a younger generation to explore their creativity on creating social harmony. But my case is different. Being a teacher by profession, I have worked and taught in rural schools staying outside of the home. This decision of mine was supported by my parents when I asked for their permission.
Younger people are full of enthusiasm. They are ready to take any risk for more productivity, they work harder in bringing an organization at apogee and solve out any problems that may arise during their work. Young people when they get opportunities, they are capable of changing the whole world by bringing development in medical, engineering and information technologies field. We can take the example of Mark Zuckerberg who is among the richest person in the world. He has brought a drastic change in the society by developing a social site called Facebook, and have made easier for us to connect with other members of society by staying in a room. This explains how younger people are playing an influential role in social reforms.
In conclusion, I believe that Young people directly play an important role in determining the future of society if given chance to explore their capability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02034883721 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82037124919 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2756101933 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310159726387 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939549499958 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111216092503 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200226659356 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995711138717 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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