As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
It is not uncommon that technology is doing good on providing facilities for human kind. That is why i go strongly against of this statement.
From the early age of the civilization, science and technology is making people's life more easier. In the earlier days, people used to have only instruments that are very primitive with respect to operation and efficiency. The technology-the fast evolving creature created by human mind then shaped human civilization with modern equipment and their use make it plausible these things that were supposed to be impossible at that time.
Many company are rising and evolving developing many instrument that makes human life easier. For example, Microsoft, a leading computer software manufacturer of the world, made very useful computer devices that are easy to use., People are now can manage presentation and report about any thing they performed, at very ease. That is only made possible via use of such technology. People can manage to do a lot of works only with a simple program they designed.
Technology also made us easier to connect people from different geographical and social roots. With the use of mobile phone, anyone can connect his or her friends and family far from him with ease. Revolution on agriculture and industry has made it possible to produce a large amount of crops on very small input of things. Also, it is now making people 's life easier from their ways too.
It is not false that people are now distressing and not exercising their brain for similar works that now can be done with computer. People should focus their potentiality towards advancement of existing systems and thus human can afford very advanced technology easily. That can help human by both exercising their capability and making their life easier.
In conclusion, technology is making people's life more easier and people has to think about how to advance the existing technology so that human will be benefited by both terms.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... facilities for human kind. That is why i go strongly against of this statement. ...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...e and technology is making peoples life more easier. In the earlier days, people used to ha...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to have only instruments that are very primitive with respect to operation and ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many companies'.
Suggestion: Many companies
...posed to be impossible at that time. Many company are rising and evolving developing many...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun instrument seems to be countable; consider using: 'many instruments'.
Suggestion: many instruments
...pany are rising and evolving developing many instrument that makes human life easier. For examp...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...an manage presentation and report about any thing they performed, at very ease. That is o...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... People should focus their potentiality towards advancement of existing systems ...
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Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...ry advanced technology easily. That can help human by both exercising their capabili...
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Line 11, column 50, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...sion, technology is making peoples life more easier and people has to think about how to ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06116207951 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65670923805 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538226299694 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6554216542 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3529411765 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167985428799 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595648953347 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470113143105 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106969940581 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456902109915 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.